零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda daha aydın və təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Cümlələrinizi qısa və məntiqli saxlayın, təkrarları və qarışıqlığı aradan qaldırın. Məsələn, "I usually eat snacks twice a week, but I don't like eating them in the evening because it can harm digestion." kimi ifadələr daha təbii və anlaşılandır.

範例: I usually eat snacks twice a week, mostly in the afternoon. However, I avoid eating snacks in the evening because I believe it can negatively affect digestion.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və düzgün qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, "I think eating snacks, especially in the evening, is unhealthy because it causes digestion problems for me." kimi ifadələr istifadə edin. Həmçinin, söz seçiminizə diqqət edin və qarışıqlıq yaratmayın.

範例: I believe eating snacks in the evening is unhealthy because it causes me digestive problems and discomfort.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha sadə və aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, "Yes, I used to eat snacks often as a child. Once, I ate more than two kilograms of snacks in one day, which harmed my stomach." kimi ifadələr daha düzgün və anlaşılandır.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child. Once, I ate more than two kilograms of snacks in a single day, which caused stomach problems.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, "I prefer salty snacks because they make me feel comfortable and satisfied." kimi ifadələr istifadə edin. Qarışıqlıq və təkrarları aradan qaldırın.

範例: I prefer salty snacks because they make me feel comfortable and satisfied after eating.

× I eat snacks twice in a in a week

✓ I eat snacks twice a week

The phrase 'twice in a in a week' is incorrect due to redundancy and incorrect article usage. The correct expression is 'twice a week' to indicate frequency.

× and but if the hospital I it's not my cup of tea.

✓ but if it's about the hospital, it's not my cup of tea.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Adding 'if it's about the hospital' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I know there are many disadvantage for everybody our digestion.

✓ I know there are many disadvantages for everyone's digestion.

'Disadvantage' should be plural 'disadvantages' to agree with 'many'. Also, 'everybody our digestion' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone's digestion' to show possession.

× when I eat snacks, especially in the evening, I suffer from my biggest digestion

✓ when I eat snacks, especially in the evening, I suffer from indigestion

'Biggest digestion' is incorrect; the correct term is 'indigestion' which is a noun describing digestive discomfort.

× I feel angry on my. On my garden.

✓ I feel discomfort in my stomach.

'Angry on my garden' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely discomfort in the stomach, so 'discomfort in my stomach' is appropriate.

× Is I did when I used to eat snacks when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did eat snacks when I was a child.

The original sentence has unnecessary words and incorrect structure. 'Yes, I did eat snacks when I was a child.' is the correct past tense response.

× Unfortunately, I had experience harmful damage on my stomach

✓ Unfortunately, I experienced harmful damage to my stomach

'Had experience harmful damage' is incorrect; 'experienced harmful damage' is correct. Also, 'damage on my stomach' should be 'damage to my stomach'.

× even once I eat more than two kilogram snacks in one day.

✓ once I ate more than two kilograms of snacks in one day.

'Eat' should be past tense 'ate' to match the past context. 'Kilogram' should be plural 'kilograms' and 'snacks' should be preceded by 'of'.

× If I eat any snacks it would be salty because I enjoy when I eat something no matter what is this, it's should be only salty.

✓ If I eat any snacks, they would be salty because I enjoy eating something salty, no matter what it is.

'It would be salty' should refer to 'snacks' which is plural, so 'they would be salty'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× After that I feel comfortable and a great feeling on my stomach.

✓ After that, I feel comfortable and have a great feeling in my stomach.

The original sentence lacks proper verb agreement and preposition use. Adding 'have' and changing 'on' to 'in' corrects the sentence.