零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but try to make your sentences clearer and more natural. Avoid run-on sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I usually have my snack at 3:00 PM because I have lunch early at 10:00 AM. By 3:00 PM, I feel hungry, so I need a snack to keep my energy up."

範例: I usually eat snacks at around 3:00 PM because I have my lunch early at 10:00 AM. By mid-afternoon, I start feeling hungry, so having a snack helps me stay energized until dinner.

建議: Your answer is good but try to improve clarity and grammar. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly and avoid informal words like "slug." Also, be more specific about why certain snacks are healthy. For example, "Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose the right foods, such as fruits and nuts, because they provide essential nutrients and energy."

範例: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if you choose nutritious options like fruits and nuts. These snacks provide vitamins and energy, which help me avoid feeling tired during the day.

建議: Your answer covers the idea but the sentence structure is confusing. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words like "and" or "because." Also, avoid repeating the same idea. For example, "Yes, I have eaten snacks since I was young and I still do. I think I will continue because I need to eat something every few hours to keep my energy."

範例: Yes, I have eaten snacks since I was young and I still eat them now. I usually eat something every three to four hours because it helps me maintain my energy throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is quite good and natural. To improve, try to use linking words like "sometimes" and "other times" to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid repeating "depends" twice. For example, "Sometimes I eat fruits and nuts, other times I enjoy spicy noodles. If I'm not in the mood to cook, I usually have tea with biscuits because it's easy."

範例: Sometimes I eat fruits and nuts, and other times I enjoy spicy hot noodles. If I'm feeling bored or not very hungry, I usually have tea with biscuits because it's simple and quick.

× Well I usually have my snack at 3:00 PM because I will have my lunch at 10:00 AM until three PMI will be hungry so snack is needed for me to get my body energized.

✓ Well I usually have my snack at 3:00 PM because I have my lunch at 10:00 AM and until three I get hungry, so a snack is needed for me to get my body energized.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' to describe habitual actions and states, which is inappropriate for future tense. Instead, present simple tense should be used to express habitual actions. Also, 'until three PMI will be hungry' is incorrect; it should be 'until three I get hungry'. Additionally, 'snack is needed' lacks an article; 'a snack is needed' is correct.

× Yes definitely and it also depends what you are having because I try to keep some healthy snacks like fruits and nuts so it is definitely healthy for me to eat snacks.

✓ Yes, definitely, and it also depends on what you are having because I try to keep some healthy snacks like fruits and nuts, so it is definitely healthy for me to eat snacks.

The phrase 'depends what you are having' is missing the preposition 'on'. The correct phrase is 'depends on what you are having'. Prepositions are necessary to link verbs to their objects properly.

× Other than that I feel very slug as if I am hungry so I have to have something during the day.

✓ Other than that, I feel very sluggish as if I am hungry, so I have to have something during the day.

The word 'slug' is a noun referring to an animal, but the intended meaning is an adjective describing a feeling of tiredness or lethargy. The correct adjective is 'sluggish'. Using the correct adjective improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I have been eating snacks since I was young and I eat till now and I most probably I will eat it my whole life because I have to eat something in time to time.

✓ Yes, I have been eating snacks since I was young and I eat them till now, and most probably I will eat them my whole life because I have to eat something from time to time.

The phrase 'eat till now' is awkward; 'eat them till now' is better to specify the object. Also, 'eat it my whole life' should be 'eat them my whole life' to agree with the plural 'snacks'. The phrase 'in time to time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'from time to time'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Even if I eat less I have to eat within 3 or 4 hours of interval.

✓ Even if I eat less, I have to eat within intervals of 3 or 4 hours.

The phrase 'within 3 or 4 hours of interval' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'within intervals of 3 or 4 hours' or 'every 3 or 4 hours'. Prepositions must be used correctly to express time intervals.

× Well, it generally depends upon what we have in our kitchen.

✓ Well, it generally depends on what we have in our kitchen.

The phrase 'depends upon' is less common and can be simplified to 'depends on'. Both are grammatically correct, but 'depends on' is more natural in this context.

× Someday it's just fruits and nuts and someday it's spicy hot noodles.

✓ Some days it's just fruits and nuts and some days it's spicy hot noodles.

The word 'Someday' refers to an unspecified time in the future, but the intended meaning is 'some days' meaning certain days. Using the correct pronoun improves clarity.

× And if I'm quite bored and not in the mood, I will probably have some tea with biscuit, which does not require much effort.

✓ If I'm quite bored and not in the mood, I will probably have some tea with biscuits, which do not require much effort.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' to agree with 'some'. The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'biscuits', so the verb should be plural 'do' instead of 'does'.