零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I usually don't eat snacks often because I think they are not good for my health. However, I sometimes eat snacks when I feel stressed because it helps me relax.

建議: 回答内容混乱，缺乏逻辑和具体细节。建议直接表达观点，并用具体原因支持，同时使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because many snacks contain artificial colors and unhealthy ingredients. Therefore, I rarely eat them.

建議: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议用简单句子清楚描述过去的习惯，并说明家人的看法。

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. My mother was worried because she thought eating too many snacks was bad for my health and wanted me to focus on my studies.

建議: 回答较为简单，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用更丰富的词汇描述喜欢的零食，并说明原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer eating chocolate because it tastes delicious. Moreover, it helps to improve my mood and relieve stress when I feel tired.

× It just leads now because I think there is not good for my house so.

✓ It just leads now because I think it is not good for my health.

句中缺少主语，且表达不清晰。'leads'用法不当，应改为表达原因的句子。'house'应为'health'，因为语境是关于健康。

× I just say this selects when I have stress.

✓ I just eat snacks when I have stress.

'say this selects'无意义，应该是表达'我吃零食'，因此用'eat snacks'替换。

× Naturally, I think most dislikes has snot out.

✓ Naturally, I think most people dislike snacks.

原句语法混乱，'dislikes has snot out'无意义，应改为'people dislike snacks'。

× Artificial colors send healthy ingredients, so that's why I seldom.

✓ Artificial colors and unhealthy ingredients are present, so that's why I seldom eat snacks.

'send'用法错误，应为'are present'或'contain'。句子缺少谓语，且表达不完整。

× It is let's now and prefer through this, work through that.

✓ I prefer to avoid them now and focus on working instead.

原句语法混乱，'let's now'和'prefer through this'无意义，应改为表达现在避免吃零食，专注工作。

× Oh yes, I really eat any snacks whenever young my mom.

✓ Oh yes, I really ate snacks whenever I was young, my mom said.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，'eat'改为'ate'，并补充完整句子结构。

× You already told me too now.

✓ She already told me about it.

'You'应为指代母亲的第三人称单数'she'，且句子结构需调整。

× Tell me know to each to Malley, she was worried about it.

✓ She told me clearly that she was worried about it.

原句语法混乱，'tell me know to each to Malley'无意义，应改为表达母亲清楚告诉我她担心这件事。

× Too many slacks would be better for my house, for example.

✓ Too many snacks would be bad for my health, for example.

'slacks'应为'snacks'，且'better'用法错误，应为'bad'。'house'应为'health'。

× She wanted to make me to focus on building houses.

✓ She wanted me to focus on studying.

'make me to focus'中'to'多余，应去掉。'building houses'与语境不符，应为'studying'。

× Chocolate has delicious test at.

✓ Chocolate has a delicious taste.

'test at'拼写错误，应为'taste'，且需加冠词'a'。

× It also helped me to brighten my mood and the relieve my stress.

✓ It also helps me to brighten my mood and relieve my stress.

'helped'应为现在时'helps'，'the relieve'中'the'多余，应去掉。