零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details with linking words to make your response more coherent and natural. Avoid redundancy and aim for concise sentences.

範例: I usually eat snacks during my workday, roughly every 30 minutes. This habit helps me stay focused and keeps my energy levels up throughout the day.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and lacks smooth linking. Use clearer vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be more specific about the types of snacks and their benefits.

範例: I believe snacking can be healthy if you choose the right foods. For instance, eating nuts or fruit provides essential nutrients and boosts your energy between meals.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors that affect understanding. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, usually healthier options like fruit or dark chocolate. Nowadays, I still enjoy snacking but I pay more attention to choosing nutritious foods to maintain my health.

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and contains incomplete sentences. Try to form complete, coherent sentences with linking words. Be specific about why you like dark chocolate and its benefits, avoiding vague phrases.

範例: I enjoy many snacks daily, but my favourite is dark chocolate. It provides me with energy for work and contains antioxidants that are good for my health.

× I love doing things, keep things in my mouth.

✓ I love doing things, keeping things in my mouth.

The verb 'keep' should be in the -ing form 'keeping' to correctly follow the verb 'love doing' and maintain parallel structure.

× Basically when I go to my work, I snack every like within 30 minutes.

✓ Basically when I go to work, I snack every like within 30 minutes.

The phrase 'go to my work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go to work' without 'my' as 'work' here is an uncountable noun referring to the place of employment.

× If you are having a nuts or something earlier version of. Snack bowls then it might be very healthy and it helps to increase your energy level.

✓ If you are having nuts or something like an earlier version of snack bowls, then it might be very healthy and it helps to increase your energy level.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'nuts'. Also, the phrase 'something earlier version of. Snack bowls' is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I used to have a lot of thanks when I was young, but still in my present day also I love to neck.

✓ Yes, I used to have a lot of snacks when I was young, but even in my present day I still love to snack.

The word 'thanks' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks'. Also, 'love to neck' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'love to snack'. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× If I had to think back then I used to refer on healthier version of snacking like shifts chocolates.

✓ If I had to think back then I used to prefer a healthier version of snacking like dark chocolates.

The verb 'refer on' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'shifts chocolates' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'dark chocolates'. The sentence needs correction for preposition and word choice.

× But now I'm more focused on my health so I I do snack.

✓ But now I'm more focused on my health, so I do snack.

There is a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× There are lots of snacks that I love and still I do prefer having them on my daily basis.

✓ There are lots of snacks that I love, and I still prefer having them on a daily basis.

The phrase 'on my daily basis' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on a daily basis'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses.

× But if I had to choose one, it will be dark chocolate.

✓ But if I had to choose one, it would be dark chocolate.

The conditional sentence requires 'would' instead of 'will' to correctly express a hypothetical situation in the present or future.

× I do prefer dark chocolate because it gives me the energy for my word.

✓ I do prefer dark chocolate because it gives me the energy for my work.

The word 'word' is a typo and should be 'work' to make sense in the context of energy for work.

× Along with that it has a very. Nutritious benefits and keeps me.

✓ Along with that, it has very nutritious benefits and keeps me healthy.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Very' should modify 'nutritious benefits' without a full stop. Also, 'keeps me' is incomplete and needs an adjective like 'healthy' to complete the thought.