零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific details about your snacking habits using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I usually eat snacks in the evening, around 6:00 pm, whenever I have some free time after work or school.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Provide a clear opinion first, then explain your reasoning with specific examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I think eating snacks with a lot of sugar, like chocolate, is not healthy. Therefore, I try to avoid such snacks to maintain good health.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Respond with a clear topic sentence about your past snacking habits and add specific details to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I enjoyed sweet treats and salty chips after school.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a direct response naming your favorite snacks and explain why you like them, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I like to eat fruits and nuts as snacks because they are healthy and give me energy.

× Are you free snacks?

✓ Do you eat snacks when you are free?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you' and 'free snacks' together, which is confusing. The pronoun 'you' should be used properly with the verb, and 'free snacks' is not a correct phrase. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by asking if the person eats snacks when they have free time.

× Whenever I get free time I eat snacks like when it's 6:00 or something like that.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I eat snacks, like at 6:00 or something like that.

The phrase 'get free time' is less natural than 'have free time'. Also, 'like when it's 6:00' should be 'like at 6:00' because 'at' is the correct preposition for specific times.

× Like, yeah, we told with sugar.

✓ Like, yeah, they are loaded with sugar.

The original sentence uses 'we told' which is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that snacks contain a lot of sugar, so 'they are loaded with sugar' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× And like, chocolate is not healthy. I I eat like I eat nothing.

✓ And like, chocolate is not healthy. I hardly eat it.

The sentence 'I I eat like I eat nothing' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction simplifies the meaning to express that the speaker rarely eats chocolate.

× I'm young and I love snacks and I also like talk lated it.

✓ When I was young, I loved snacks and I also liked to talk about them.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'I'm young' with past context. The phrase 'talk lated it' is incorrect; it likely means 'talked about it'. The correction uses past tense to match the question about the past.

× It it. What my?

✓ What snacks do I like?

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction forms a proper question that fits the examiner's question about favorite snacks.