零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper articles and plural forms. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the snacks and timing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I usually eat snacks twice a day. In the morning, I have two biscuits, and in the afternoon, I enjoy a snack called 'coders' in my language, which is quite popular.

建議: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more coherent. Use linking words to explain why you think the snacks are healthy and provide specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I believe eating snacks daily is healthy for me because I usually choose sugar-free cheese biscuits. They help me maintain steady energy levels, which allows me to perform tasks effectively.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases and be more specific about your childhood habits. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child. I especially liked chocolate-flavored biscuits and never missed a chance to eat them. Whenever my father went to the city, I would ask him to bring a packet of biscuits for me.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid repetition. Explain the snacks briefly and use linking words to list them coherently.

範例: I enjoy eating biscuits and pakoras, which are made from flour and various spices. They often contain vegetables like cheese, broccoli, and potatoes. Additionally, I like burgers and chicken fingers, which are my favourite snacks.

× In morning I take 2 biscuit an in afternoon I like to have a snack like coders in my language.

✓ In the morning I take 2 biscuits and in the afternoon I like to have a snack like coders in my language.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'morning' and 'afternoon' to specify the time of day. Also, 'biscuit' should be plural as it refers to more than one item, and 'an' should be corrected to 'and' to connect the two clauses.

× In morning I take 2 biscuit an in afternoon I like to have a snack like coders in my language.

✓ In the morning I take 2 biscuits and in the afternoon I like to have a snack like coders in my language.

The noun 'biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' because the quantity '2' indicates more than one.

× I like to eat big cheese biscuit which is sugar free because it helped me to keep constant my energy and perform a task effectively.

✓ I like to eat big cheese biscuits which are sugar free because they help me to keep my energy constant and perform tasks effectively.

The definite article 'the' is not necessary before 'big cheese biscuit' when speaking generally. Also, 'biscuit' should be plural to match the general statement. 'It' should be changed to 'they' to agree with the plural noun. The verb tense should be present to match the habitual action.

× I like to eat big cheese biscuit which is sugar free because it helped me to keep constant my energy and perform a task effectively.

✓ I like to eat big cheese biscuits which are sugar free because they help me to keep my energy constant and perform tasks effectively.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense but the sentence talks about a habitual action, so present tense 'help' is appropriate. Also, 'perform a task' should be plural 'perform tasks' to generalize the statement.

× Yes, when I was at children I found off eating biscuits as I never miss about to eat a biscuit because I like to read them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I loved eating biscuits as I never missed eating a biscuit because I liked to eat them.

'At children' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a child'. 'Found off' is incorrect; 'loved' or 'enjoyed' is appropriate. 'Never miss about to eat' is incorrect; it should be 'never missed eating'. 'Read them' is incorrect; it should be 'eat them'.

× Yes, when I was at children I found off eating biscuits as I never miss about to eat a biscuit because I like to read them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I loved eating biscuits as I never missed eating a biscuit because I liked to eat them.

The verbs 'found off', 'miss', and 'like' are incorrectly used in present tense or incorrect form; they should be in past tense 'loved', 'missed', and 'liked' to match the past time frame.

× Yes, when I was at children I found off eating biscuits as I never miss about to eat a biscuit because I like to read them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I loved eating biscuits as I never missed eating a biscuit because I liked to eat them.

The noun 'biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' when referring generally, and 'them' correctly refers to plural biscuits.

× When my father go to a city I usually ask him to take a one packet of biscuit for me.

✓ When my father goes to a city I usually ask him to take one packet of biscuits for me.

The verb 'go' should be 'goes' to agree with third person singular. 'A one packet' is incorrect; 'one packet' is sufficient. 'Biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' as packets contain multiple biscuits.

× When my father go to a city I usually ask him to take a one packet of biscuit for me.

✓ When my father goes to a city I usually ask him to take one packet of biscuits for me.

The verb 'go' must be conjugated as 'goes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my father'.

× When my father go to a city I usually ask him to take a one packet of biscuit for me.

✓ When my father goes to a city I usually ask him to take one packet of biscuits for me.

'Biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' because a packet contains multiple biscuits.

× I really liked it biscuit in my childhood.

✓ I really liked biscuits in my childhood.

'It biscuit' is incorrect; 'biscuits' is plural and no article is needed here. The past tense 'liked' is correct to describe childhood.

× I really liked it biscuit in my childhood.

✓ I really liked biscuits in my childhood.

The noun 'biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' to refer generally to the item.

× I like to eat biscuit as well as some pakodas which are made-up of flow and different type of masalas and they contain also vegetables like like cheese, broccoli, potato and I really like to eat burgers as well as fingers as it is my most.

✓ I like to eat biscuits as well as some pakodas which are made of flour and different types of masalas and they also contain vegetables like cheese, broccoli, and potato. I really like to eat burgers as well as fingers as they are my favorite.

'Made-up of flow' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'made of flour'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. 'Contain also' should be 'also contain'. 'Like like' is a repetition error. 'It is my most' is incomplete; 'they are my favorite' is appropriate.

× I like to eat biscuit as well as some pakodas which are made-up of flow and different type of masalas and they contain also vegetables like like cheese, broccoli, potato and I really like to eat burgers as well as fingers as it is my most.

✓ I like to eat biscuits as well as some pakodas which are made of flour and different types of masalas and they also contain vegetables like cheese, broccoli, and potato. I really like to eat burgers as well as fingers as they are my favorite.

The noun 'biscuit' should be plural 'biscuits' to refer generally. 'Type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'different'. 'Potato' should be plural 'potatoes' to match the list of vegetables.