零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary questions back to the examiner, and use correct grammar. Also, limit your answer to 3-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I usually eat snacks after work, especially when I feel tired. I prefer snacks that are easy to prepare, such as sandwiches, instant noodles, or chips. These help me recharge quickly before dinner.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to combine your ideas into coherent sentences using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure to improve clarity.

範例: I think it depends on the type of snack. For example, sandwiches with vegetables are healthy because they provide nutrients. However, eating instant noodles frequently is unhealthy since they contain preservatives that may harm my kidneys or bladder.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid vague phrases like 'I will never get' and try to provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. As a child and teenager, I always craved snacks. I remember my siblings and I would often fight over food, but those moments are fun memories for me.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your preferences. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'depends on my mood in liquid'.

範例: The snacks I like to eat depend on my mood. For example, this week I have been enjoying instant noodles, but sometimes I prefer chips. My snack choices change based on how I feel each day.

× Are you supposed to eat snacks during after work?

✓ Am I supposed to eat snacks during or after work?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Are you supposed' when the student is referring to themselves, so 'Am I supposed' is correct. Also, 'during after work' is incorrect; it should be 'during or after work' to clarify the time.

× I look for something that's easily to prepare, like, uhm, sandwich.

✓ I look for something that's easy to prepare, like, uhm, a sandwich.

The adjective 'easy' should be used instead of the adverb 'easily' because it describes the noun 'something'. Also, 'sandwich' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Instant noodles and chips.

✓ Instant noodles and chips.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a list; no correction needed here.

× For example if I will be eating a sandwich.

✓ For example, if I am eating a sandwich.

The use of 'will be eating' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a general condition, so present continuous 'am eating' is appropriate.

× I think that's not good for my.

✓ I think that's not good for me.

The possessive pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used; the object pronoun 'me' is correct after the preposition 'for'.

× Bladder or kidney because it contains a preservatives.

✓ Bladder or kidney because they contain preservatives.

'Bladder or kidney' refers to two organs, so the plural pronoun 'they' is appropriate. Also, 'preservatives' should be plural without the article 'a'.

× Yes, definitely I have.

✓ Yes, definitely I have.

This sentence is acceptable as a short answer; no correction needed.

× I think when you are young or when you turn into teenagers, you always have that cravings for snacks.

✓ I think when you are young or when you turn into a teenager, you always have those cravings for snacks.

'Turn into teenagers' should be 'turn into a teenager' to match singular subject 'you'. Also, 'that cravings' should be 'those cravings' because 'cravings' is plural.

× I remember my siblings and I always fighting over food.

✓ I remember my siblings and I always fighting over food.

The sentence is missing a verb form; it should be 'I remember my siblings and I always fought over food.' to be grammatically correct.

× But for me it's a fun memory because I will never get.

✓ But for me it's a fun memory because I will never forget.

The verb 'get' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'forget' to express the intended meaning.

× Will it depends on my mood?

✓ It depends on my mood.

'Will it depends' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It depends' for a general statement.

× so I think the kind of snacks that I eat. Depends on my mood in liquid.

✓ So I think the kind of snacks that I eat depends on my mood and liking.

The sentence was fragmented and 'in liquid' is incorrect; likely intended 'and liking' or 'and mood'. Also, 'depends' should be connected to the subject properly.