零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达情绪时用词不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议练习用简单清晰的句子表达时间和原因，避免语法错误。

範例: I usually eat snacks when I feel upset because they comfort me and make me feel better.

建議: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达观点时应避免重复，注意主谓一致和句子完整性。建议用简洁句子表达观点并给出原因。

範例: In my opinion, eating snacks is not healthy because they contain a lot of sugar and oil, which can harm your health.

建議: 回答中断且语句不完整，表达时间顺序混乱。建议练习完整表达过去习惯，注意句子连贯和逻辑。

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my parents always gave me some after I came back from school.

建議: 回答中断且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用完整句子表达喜好并说明原因，避免无关或错误信息。

範例: I like to eat chocolate because it comes in many forms, and eating it makes me feel happy and comfortable.

× But I feel upset and set.

✓ But I feel upset and sad.

这里'set'用错了，应该用形容词'sad'表示情绪。'set'不是描述情绪的正确形容词。

× A ways it's snacks and it can comfort my emotion and make me feel better.

✓ Always it's snacks and it can comfort my emotions and make me feel better.

'A ways'拼写错误，正确应为'always'，表示总是。'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，因为情绪通常是复数。

× In my opinion. It's in my opinion eating snacks.

✓ In my opinion, eating snacks

句子结构不完整且重复，应该合并为完整句子，去掉多余部分。

× Isn't healthy because snacks contains a lot of sugar and oil, it makes it may endanger your health healthy.

✓ Isn't healthy because snacks contain a lot of sugar and oil, which may endanger your health.

snacks是复数，动词应用复数形式contain。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Be 'cause my parents. Always gave me lots of snacks before I after after I came back to school.

✓ Because my parents always gave me lots of snacks after I came back from school.

句子中有多余词汇'Be'cause'和重复'after'，应删除。时态使用正确，需调整语序使句子通顺。

× Came back from school and.

✓ I came back from school.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× I'm a big fan of chocolate because chocolate can be made as a lot of products.

✓ I'm a big fan of chocolate because chocolate can be made into a lot of products.

短语'made as a lot of products'错误，应为'made into a lot of products'，表示“制成许多产品”。

× And when I. When I eat chocolate, it can make me comfortable.

✓ And when I eat chocolate, it makes me feel comfortable.

句子断裂且用词不当，'make me comfortable'应为'makes me feel comfortable'，表达更自然。

× And feel happy. When I was opposite.

✓ and feel happy when I was upset.

'opposite'用错，正确应为'upset'表示心情不好。句子应连贯表达情绪变化。