天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有语音停顿。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: The weather in my city is moderate throughout the year. Summers can be a bit hot, while winters are generally warm and cool.

建議: 表达中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'sweater'应为'sweat'。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性，避免重复。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I sweat easily and dislike the hot, humid summers. Cold weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities comfortably.

建議: 回答不完整，句子未结束，表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I prefer wet weather because the humidity helps my nose feel more comfortable. However, it can be annoying when moisture causes dampness on walls and windows.

建議: 回答较完整，但有语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法准确。

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but I always carry an umbrella. It protects me from the sun on hot days and from rain when it showers.

建議: 表达不够流畅，句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，丰富内容。

範例: One major effect of climate change is the unusual weather patterns we've experienced recently. For example, my usually humid city has felt drier at times in recent years.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议练习流畅表达，避免重复，使用恰当的连接词。

範例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. Currently, I live in southern China, but when I travel to the north, I enjoy the drier summers because I don't sweat as much.

× The weather in my city is moderate. For all The Four Seasons and in summer it is a little bit hot, but in winter it is warm and. Cool.

✓ The weather in my city is moderate throughout all four seasons. In summer, it is a little bit hot, but in winter it is warm and cool.

原句句子结构混乱，断句不当，导致表达不清晰。应将句子合理分段，调整词序，使表达更连贯。建议将“for all The Four Seasons”改为“throughout all four seasons”，并将“and. Cool.”合并为“and cool”。

× I prefer cold weather because I am the person who is really easy to sweater and I don't like the humid, hot boiling weather in summer.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I am a person who sweats easily and I don't like the humid, hot, boiling weather in summer.

“easy to sweater”用法错误，应使用动词“sweat”的正确形式。这里应表达“我容易出汗”，应使用“sweat easily”。

× It always makes me sweater and I like to go outside so.

✓ It always makes me sweat and I like to go outside.

“makes me sweater”错误，动词“sweat”应为原形，且句尾“so”多余，应去掉。

× Actually I prefer wet weather because the enough humid steam in the air makes my nose feel more comfortable, but it is a little bit annoying that the walls and the windows of the house would always.

✓ Actually, I prefer wet weather because the humid steam in the air makes my nose feel more comfortable, but it is a little bit annoying that the walls and windows of the house are always damp.

句子结构不完整，“the enough humid steam”表达不自然，应为“the humid steam”。句尾不完整，应补充完整表达。

× Oh, in my daily life I don't have the habit of checking weather forecast.

✓ Oh, in my daily life I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast.

“weather forecast”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指天气预报。

× I but I will always take an umbrella with me.

✓ But I will always take an umbrella with me.

句子中“I but I”结构错误，应去掉多余的“I”。

× If the weather is hot, I can use it to cover the sun and if it rains it could prevent me from the rain.

✓ If the weather is hot, I can use it to shield myself from the sun, and if it rains, it can protect me from the rain.

“cover the sun”表达不准确，改为“shield myself from the sun”更自然；“prevent me from the rain”应为“protect me from the rain”。

× The biggest effect of climate change is the uncommon weather in recent years, especially in my city.

✓ The biggest effect of climate change is the unusual weather in recent years, especially in my city.

“uncommon weather”用词不当，通常用“unusual weather”来表达“异常天气”。

× It is a city all full of humidity actually, but recent years I feel sometimes dry.

✓ It is a city full of humidity actually, but in recent years I sometimes feel it is dry.

“all full of humidity”表达多余，“recent years”前应加介词“in”，句子结构调整更自然。

× I am leaving in the southern part of China now and when I travel to the northern part as a tourist I really like the weather there.

✓ I am living in the southern part of China now, and when I travel to the northern part as a tourist, I really like the weather there.

“am leaving”误用，应为“am living”表示居住状态。

× The the summer there is not so wet and dry so I don't sweat.

✓ The summer there is not so wet and dry, so I don't sweat.

句首重复“the”，应去掉多余的“the”。