天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi như 'It can't quite scorching' nên sửa thành 'It can be quite scorching'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I live in Ho Chi Minh City, where the weather is generally hot and humid all year round. We don't have four distinct seasons; instead, there are just the dry and rainy seasons. It can be quite scorching during the day, especially in April and May, but I have gotten used to it.

建議: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do cụ thể, tuy nhiên có lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng như 'stream cold weather' nên sửa thành 'extreme cold weather'. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Personally, I prefer cold weather because it feels much more comfortable and refreshing, unlike hot weather which can be exhausting and sticky. Moreover, cold temperatures make it easier to concentrate and enjoy outdoor activities. However, I don't enjoy extreme cold weather; I prefer a mild and pleasant coolness.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'What weather' nên sửa thành 'Wet weather'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I definitely prefer dry weather because it's much more convenient, especially when I have to go out or travel around the city. Wet weather can be quite troublesome with all the puddles and heavy downpours, especially during the rainy season in Ho Chi Minh City. Therefore, dry days just feel cleaner and more predictable.

建議: Bạn trả lời đầy đủ nhưng có lỗi từ vựng như 'darling habit' nên sửa thành 'daily habit' và tên thành phố 'Optima City' không chính xác. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave the house. It has become a daily habit because the weather in Ho Chi Minh City can change quite suddenly, especially during the rainy season. I usually check it on my phone, either through a weather app or by doing a quick Google search.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh, nên nối các ý lại để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

範例: I think climate change has had a serious impact in recent years. We are seeing more frequent and intense natural disasters like floods, heat waves, and wildfires across many parts of the world. For example, in Vietnam, unpredictable weather patterns and rising sea levels are causing significant problems.

建議: Bạn trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa mạch lạc như 'For example.' nên nối câu lại. Ngoài ra, câu 'or I would be amazing' nên sửa thành 'it would be amazing'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Yes, absolutely. I would love to visit cities with cooler and even snowy climates since that's completely different from the hot and humid weather in Ho Chi Minh City. For example, I've always wanted to experience winter in places like Japan or Canada, and it would be amazing to see snow for the first time.

× It can't quite scorching during the day, especially around May, April, but I've gotten used to it.

✓ It can't be quite scorching during the day, especially around May, April, but I've gotten used to it.

The verb 'scorching' is a present participle and needs a form of 'be' to form the present continuous tense. The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'be' after 'can't', which is necessary to correctly express the meaning.

× I don't really enjoy stream cold weather either, just the mild pleasant kind of cool.

✓ I don't really enjoy strong cold weather either, just the mild pleasant kind of cool.

The word 'stream' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'strong' to describe the intensity of cold weather. Using the correct adjective improves clarity and meaning.

× What weather can be quite troublesome with all the puddles and certain downpours, especially during the rainy season in Ho Chi Minh City, dry days just feel cleaner and more predictable.

✓ That weather can be quite troublesome with all the puddles and certain downpours, especially during the rainy season in Ho Chi Minh City; dry days just feel cleaner and more predictable.

The pronoun 'What' is incorrectly used to refer to weather; 'That' is the correct demonstrative pronoun here. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× It's become a darling habit because the weather in Optima City can change quite suddenly, especially during the rainy season.

✓ It's become a daily habit because the weather in Ho Chi Minh City can change quite suddenly, especially during the rainy season.

The word 'darling' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'daily' to indicate frequency. Also, 'Optima City' seems to be a typo for 'Ho Chi Minh City', which should be corrected for accuracy.

× I usually take it on my phone, either through a weather app or just click a Google search.

✓ I usually check it on my phone, either through a weather app or by just clicking a Google search.

The verb 'take' is incorrect in this context; 'check' is appropriate for looking at the weather forecast. Also, the phrase 'just click a Google search' needs to be rephrased to 'by just clicking a Google search' for grammatical correctness.

× In Vietnam, for example, unpredictable weather patterns and rising sea levels.

✓ In Vietnam, for example, there are unpredictable weather patterns and rising sea levels.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb. Adding 'there are' completes the sentence and properly introduces the subject.

× For example. I've always wanted to experience winter in places like Japan or Canada, or I would be amazing to see snow for the first time.

✓ For example, I've always wanted to experience winter in places like Japan or Canada, or it would be amazing to see snow for the first time.

The period after 'For example' should be a comma to connect the sentence properly. Also, 'I would be amazing' is incorrect; it should be 'it would be amazing' to refer to the experience.