天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达天气和感受。

範例: The weather in my city is usually warm, neither too hot nor too cold, which makes me feel comfortable. However, it sometimes rains, and I don't like getting wet because it feels unpleasant.

建議: 回答较好，但句子未完整，且缺少连接词。建议补充完整句子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer hot weather because I can do various outdoor activities like hiking, playing badminton, or having a picnic. Moreover, sunny days make me feel more energetic and happy.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I prefer dry weather because I dislike the uncomfortable feeling of getting wet. Besides, it is difficult to dry clothes during wet weather.

建議: 回答内容完整，但时态使用不当，建议使用现在时态，并优化句子结构使表达更自然。

範例: I check the weather forecast every day because it reminds me to bring an umbrella if it is going to rain. I usually use my smartphone to check the weather because it is convenient and efficient.

建議: 回答较好，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

範例: I think the effects of climate change have become more frequent recently. For example, we have experienced many extremely hot days and heavy rainfall, which have caused problems like droughts and floods.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，使用正确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I want to visit other countries because I have never seen snow before. I plan to visit places like Japan, Korea, or some Western countries where it snows.

× In my city the weather is warm, needed to hot nor too cold, which make me feel comfortable, but sometimes it rains and which make me feel ignoring because I don't like the feeling of getting wet.

✓ In my city, the weather is warm, neither too hot nor too cold, which makes me feel comfortable, but sometimes it rains and that makes me feel annoyed because I don't like the feeling of getting wet.

句中“make”应为第三人称单数形式“makes”，因为主语是单数的“weather”。此外，“needed to hot nor too cold”表达不正确，应为“neither too hot nor too cold”。“which make me feel ignoring”中的“ignoring”用词错误，应为“annoyed”表示感到烦恼。

× Also, I think sunny day make me feel more energetic and.

✓ Also, I think sunny days make me feel more energetic.

“sunny day”应为复数“sunny days”，因为表达的是一般情况，且“make”与复数主语搭配正确。句尾“and.”不完整，应去掉。

× Also, during the wet weather it is difficult for me to hem clothes to get dry.

✓ Also, during wet weather it is difficult for me to hang clothes to get dry.

“hem clothes”意思是缝衣边，错误使用，应为“hang clothes”表示晾衣服。

× I checked the weather forecast every day because I find it very useful which reminds me to bring an umbrella if the weather is going to rain.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day because I find it very useful; it reminds me to bring an umbrella if it is going to rain.

“checked”是过去式，但句意为习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“check”。“which reminds”改为“it reminds”更符合句子结构。

× Yes I I want to visit other countries because I've never seen snows before.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other countries because I've never seen snow before.

“snows”不可数名词“snow”不应使用复数形式。

× I plan to go some country like Japan, Korea or some western country that is snows.

✓ I plan to go to some countries like Japan, Korea, or some western country that has snow.

“some country”应为复数“some countries”，且“that is snows”语法错误，应为“that has snow”。