天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不完整且表达不自然，句子结构有误，缺少完整描述。建议用简洁自然的句子直接描述天气特点，并避免语法错误。

範例: I live in Guangzhou, which is near the equator, so the weather is very hot in summer. However, it rarely rains during that season.

建議: 回答不完整且句子未结束，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，并用连接词丰富内容。

範例: I prefer hot weather because I have lived in Guangzhou for over 20 years and have adapted to it. However, I sometimes find extremely hot days uncomfortable.

建議: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且缺少连接词，表达略显重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

範例: I prefer dry weather because Guangzhou is often rainy. When it rains, the streets and windows get wet, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

建議: 时态使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I check the weather forecast every day, especially before going outside, because it helps me decide whether to take an umbrella.

建議: 表达基本清晰，但句子结构简单，部分语法错误。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，并注意语法准确。

範例: Due to global warming, the weather in Guangzhou has become increasingly hot. In recent summers, temperatures have reached as high as 42 degrees Celsius.

建議: 回答较好，但“weathers”用词不当，且句子可更自然流畅。建议使用正确的词汇并优化表达。

範例: Yes, I think it's fantastic to experience different climates. I would like to visit a city with a cold climate, although I might find the low temperatures challenging.

× I live in Guangzhou and Guangzhou is a city which near to the equator, so it's very hot in summer.

✓ I live in Guangzhou and Guangzhou is a city which is near the equator, so it's very hot in summer.

句子中缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。应在“which”和“near”之间加上“is”来构成完整的定语从句。

× But in Guangzhou it seldom.

✓ But in Guangzhou, it seldom rains.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充动词“rains”使句子完整。

× Actually, I prefer the hot weather because I live in Guangzhou. For more than 20 years, I have adapted to the hot weather. If I go to the place which.

✓ Actually, I prefer the hot weather because I live in Guangzhou. For more than 20 years, I have adapted to the hot weather. If I go to a place which is cooler, I will feel different.

句子“ If I go to the place which.”不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致句意不明。应补充完整句子。

× Actually dry weather, because in Guangzhou the weather is always wet, it has a lot of rain, and the street and the windows become wet, it is very uncomfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather, because in Guangzhou the weather is always wet, it has a lot of rain, and the streets and the windows become wet, which is very uncomfortable.

缺少主语“I prefer”，导致句子不完整；“street”应为复数“streets”；“it is very uncomfortable”应改为“which is very uncomfortable”以连接前句。

× I checked the weather forecast everyday especially when I am going to outside because it will decide me if I should take an umbrella.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day, especially when I am going outside because it helps me decide if I should take an umbrella.

“checked”用过去时不符合语境，应使用一般现在时“check”；“everyday”应分开为“every day”；“going to outside”应改为“going outside”；“it will decide me”表达错误，应改为“it helps me decide”。

× I checked the weather forecast everyday especially when I am going to outside because it will decide me if I should take an umbrella.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day, especially when I am going outside because it helps me decide if I should take an umbrella.

“going to outside”中“to”不应出现，正确表达为“going outside”。

× Well, because of the global warming, I think the weather in Guangzhou is becoming warmer and warmer.

✓ Well, because of global warming, I think the weather in Guangzhou is becoming warmer and warmer.

“the global warming”中“global warming”作为不可数名词，不需要冠词“the”。

× In summer, the temperature can high up to 42°.

✓ In summer, the temperature can rise up to 42°.

“can high up to”表达错误，应使用动词“rise”表示“升高”。

× Yes, it's a fantastic thing to experience different weathers in another place.

✓ Yes, it's a fantastic thing to experience different weather in another place.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”。

× I would like to go to a cold weather city, but I think I cannot stand the low temperature.

✓ I would like to go to a city with cold weather, but I think I cannot stand the low temperature.

“go to a cold weather city”表达不自然，应改为“go to a city with cold weather”。