天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to avoid repeating words like 'mild' and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant throughout the year. For example, summers are warm but not too hot, making outdoor activities enjoyable. Additionally, we experience moderate rainfall in spring and fall, which helps keep the environment green and fresh.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating phrases and try to use linking words to connect your points clearly.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending time indoors. For example, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and drinking hot beverages, which make cold weather more comfortable and enjoyable.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise language. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Use linking words to contrast ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer wet weather because it keeps the environment fresh and helps me feel more motivated and less tired. However, I understand that sometimes wet weather can be irritating when going outside.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons and habits clearly.

範例: Since coming to Canada, I have gotten into the habit of checking the weather forecast app regularly. Unlike my home country, the weather here is unpredictable, so before going to work or going out, I always check the forecast to plan accordingly.

建議: Your answer covers important points but has some repetition and incomplete words. Use precise vocabulary and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events such as floods, hurricanes, wildfires, and droughts, resulting in significant global damage. Additionally, rising temperatures have led to melting glaciers and increased sea levels.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons and feelings about traveling.

範例: Definitely, I love visiting countries with different climates. When I travel, I enjoy experiencing new weather conditions because it feels refreshing and exciting compared to staying in the same place.

× Additionally, we also experience moderate rainfall during spring and fall, which helps to keep the environment green and.

✓ Additionally, we also experience moderate rainfall during spring and fall, which helps to keep the environment green.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I prefer cold weather because it's always feel refreshing and energy energizing, specially after spending time indoors.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it always feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending time indoors.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Energy energizing' is incorrect; 'energizing' is the correct adjective. 'Specially' should be 'especially' for correct adverb usage.

× For example, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes, enjoying hot beverages which makes cold weather more makes more comfortable additionally cold weather.

✓ For example, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and enjoying hot beverages, which makes cold weather more comfortable.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'more makes more' and lacks proper conjunctions. Adding 'and' connects the activities properly, and removing redundant words clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer wet weather as it always keeps the environment more fresh and uh we also feel motivated and doesn't feel tired when the weather the weather is wet.

✓ I prefer wet weather as it always keeps the environment fresher and we also feel motivated and don't feel tired when the weather is wet.

'More fresh' should be 'fresher' for correct comparative adjective. 'Doesn't feel tired' should be 'don't feel tired' to agree with plural subject 'we'. Repetition of 'the weather' is removed for clarity.

× But I know sometimes it's it will feel like irritating to go out.

✓ But I know sometimes it can feel irritating to go out.

Using 'can' is more appropriate to express possibility or occasional feeling. 'It will feel like irritating' is awkward and incorrect modal verb usage.

× Actually, after coming to Canada, I always used to watch the weather forecast app, not like in my country here everybody have to constantly check the weather because we cannot trust the weather in Canada.

✓ Actually, after coming to Canada, I always use the weather forecast app. Unlike in my country, here everybody has to constantly check the weather because we cannot trust the weather in Canada.

'Used to watch' implies past habit; present tense 'use' fits better. 'Not like' should be 'Unlike'. 'Everybody have' should be 'everybody has' for subject-verb agreement.

× So whenever I'm going to work and or else I'm going out, first thing I used to do is I'm just checking the weather and according to that I will.

✓ So whenever I'm going to work or going out, the first thing I do is check the weather, and according to that, I will decide what to do.

'Used to do' implies past habit; present tense 'do' fits better. 'And or else' is redundant; 'or' suffices. Sentence was incomplete; added 'decide what to do' for clarity.

× In recent years, climatic climate change has led to more frequent and severe weather conditions like flood, hurricane, wildfire, and droughts, which have caused significant damage to the entire world Addi.

✓ In recent years, climate change has led to more frequent and severe weather conditions like floods, hurricanes, wildfires, and droughts, which have caused significant damage to the entire world.

'Climatic climate change' is redundant; 'climate change' is correct. The nouns 'flood', 'hurricane', 'wildfire' should be plural to match 'droughts' and the context of multiple events. 'Addi.' is incomplete and removed.

× Additionally, rising global temperatures lead to melting glaciers and rising sea levels.

✓ Additionally, rising global temperatures have led to melting glaciers and rising sea levels.

Present perfect tense 'have led' is more appropriate to indicate ongoing effects from past to present.

× Definitely, I love to visit other countries with different climates. I can when I'm traveling to that. When I'm traveling to that countries, I will always experience the weather conditions and I can enjoy every bit of it. Not but staying in the same place one gives us that feel refreshment or the exciting.

✓ Definitely, I love to visit other countries with different climates. When I travel to those countries, I always experience the weather conditions and enjoy every bit of it. Staying in the same place does not give us that feeling of refreshment or excitement.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Corrected sentence structure for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Can when I'm traveling to that' is incomplete and removed. 'Not but' is incorrect; replaced with 'does not'. 'Feel refreshment or the exciting' corrected to 'feeling of refreshment or excitement'.