天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases. For example, mention the seasons clearly and describe the current weather in Singapore more precisely.

範例: I used to live in Myanmar, where we have three seasons: winter, rainy season, and summer. The weather there was quite pleasant. Now, I live in Singapore, which is mostly hot and humid throughout the year.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your preference. Avoid vague phrases like 'if I feel'. Be more specific about when you like hot weather.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing hoodies and long coats. However, sometimes I like hot weather, especially when I want to go to the beach or enjoy outdoor activities.

建議: Make sure your answer is complete and clear. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'wet embarrassment'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer wet weather because the rain makes the plants and trees look fresh and green. It creates a peaceful atmosphere that I really enjoy.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: I always check the weather forecast for the next day, especially on my days off. This helps me plan my activities according to whether it will be sunny or rainy.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Avoid hesitation and grammatical errors. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I believe climate change has had a big impact recently. For example, Singapore used to have more balanced weather, but now it is much hotter and more humid than before.

建議: Give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid repetition and unclear words like 'minding'. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I want to go to Canada in North America to experience the cold weather, snow, and the new season.

× I used to live in a very charming towns in Myanmar, the weather day.

✓ I used to live in a very charming town in Myanmar, the weather was nice.

The word 'towns' is plural but should be singular 'town' to match 'a very charming'. Also, the phrase 'the weather day' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'the weather was nice' to make sense.

× We have three seasons window, raining season and summer, so it's quite a pleasant Washington weather.

✓ We have three seasons: winter, rainy season, and summer, so the weather is quite pleasant.

The word 'window' is a typo for 'winter'. Also, 'raining season' should be 'rainy season'. The phrase 'Washington weather' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is better to say 'the weather is quite pleasant'. The colon is used to list the seasons properly.

× But now I'm leaving Singapore, it's mostly humid and hot.

✓ But now I'm living in Singapore, it's mostly humid and hot.

The phrase 'I'm leaving Singapore' suggests the person is departing, but context implies current residence. The correct present continuous verb is 'living' to indicate current situation.

× I personally prefer cold weather because I love to wear hoodie or long coat jackets most of the time so cold weather is my cup of tea but sometimes I do want some hot weather if I feel.

✓ I personally prefer cold weather because I love to wear hoodies or long coat jackets most of the time, so cold weather is my cup of tea. But sometimes I do want some hot weather if I feel like it.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Hoodie' should be plural 'hoodies' to match 'or long coat jackets'. The phrase 'if I feel' is incomplete and corrected to 'if I feel like it' for clarity.

× I personally prefer to have a wet weather.

✓ I personally prefer to have wet weather.

The word 'weather' is uncountable and does not need the article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I love the feeling of wet embarrassment with the greenery, uh, on greenery surrounding Then everything looks so fresh fresh but sometime I.

✓ I love the feeling of wetness with the greenery surrounding me. Then everything looks so fresh, but sometimes I...

The phrase 'wet embarrassment' is incorrect; likely intended 'wetness'. 'On greenery surrounding' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'with the greenery surrounding me'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation and structure.

× I I always check weather forecast for for the next day, then I will see whether it will be rain or sunny.

✓ I always check the weather forecast for the next day, then I will see whether it will rain or be sunny.

Repeated words 'I I' and 'for for' are errors. 'Weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'whether it will be rain or sunny' is incorrect; corrected to 'whether it will rain or be sunny'.

× Especially on my off day.

✓ Especially on my off days.

The phrase 'off day' should be plural 'off days' to indicate multiple days off, which is more natural in this context.

× Last time Singapore have more harmonise weather compared to now.

✓ Last time Singapore had more harmonious weather compared to now.

'Singapore' is singular, so the verb should be 'had' (past tense) not 'have'. 'Harmonise' is incorrect adjective form; corrected to 'harmonious'.

× Last time Singapore have more harmonise weather compared to now.

✓ Last time Singapore had more harmonious weather compared to now.

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match 'Last time'.

× It's become more humid and uh, heat hot.

✓ It's become more humid and hot.

The phrase 'heat hot' is redundant and incorrect; 'hot' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, visiting other city that have a different climate is minding especially country like North North America, Canada.

✓ Yes, visiting other cities that have different climates is exciting, especially countries like North America, Canada.

'City' should be plural 'cities' to match 'other'. 'That have' is correct for plural. 'Minding' is incorrect; likely intended 'exciting' or 'interesting'. 'Country' should be plural 'countries'. 'North North America' is a repetition; corrected to 'North America'.

× I want to visit there and experience the snow, the cold and the the the the the new season.

✓ I want to visit there and experience the snow, the cold, and the new season.

Repeated 'the' is a typing error and removed. Commas added for clarity in the list.