天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 계절별 날씨 특징을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: The weather in my country changes with the four seasons: spring is mild and pleasant, summer is hot and humid, autumn is cool and comfortable, and winter is cold and snowy.

建議: 문장이 불완전하고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 이유를 명확히 제시하고 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating; it makes me feel tired and uncomfortable.

建議: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많고 문장이 길어 이해하기 어렵습니다. 간결하고 정확한 문장으로 선호 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather is humid and uncomfortable, while dry weather feels calm and pleasant without sweating.

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지만 중복되는 표현과 불필요한 말이 있습니다. 더 간결하고 명확하게 습관과 이유를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I usually check the weather forecast in the morning when I wake up early by watching the news, but if I wake up late, I often skip it.

建議: 내용이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 기후 변화의 영향에 대해 구체적이고 논리적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Climate change has caused increased air pollution due to emissions from factories and cars, which harms the environment and human health.

建議: 문장이 어색하고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 방문 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially warm places, to enjoy a change from the windy weather in my country.

× The weather, like where I live, depends on the seasons because our country have has Four Seasons, spring, summer, autumn, winter.

✓ The weather, like where I live, depends on the seasons because our country has four seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.

'Our country have has' is incorrect because 'country' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun, and a colon is appropriate before listing the seasons.

× I dislike sweating, so sweating make me some tired and.

✓ I dislike sweating, so sweating makes me somewhat tired.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'sweating'. 'Some tired' is incorrect; 'somewhat tired' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Not feel good.

✓ It does not feel good.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'It does' completes the sentence and corrects the structure.

× wet weather makes more calm comfortable because not sweating.

✓ Wet weather makes me feel calmer and more comfortable because I am not sweating.

The original sentence lacks a subject for 'makes' and uses incorrect adjective forms. Adding 'me feel' clarifies the meaning, and 'calmer' and 'more comfortable' are the correct comparative forms.

× So I would prefer driver.

✓ So I would prefer drier weather.

'Driver' is a misspelling of 'drier', the comparative form of 'dry'. Also, 'weather' should be included for clarity.

× If I wake up early in the morning, I check, uh, Morning News.

✓ If I wake up early in the morning, I check the morning news.

'Morning News' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'the' is needed before 'morning news'.

× If I wake up late. I don't check news, so I don't know that.

✓ If I wake up late, I don't check the news, so I don't know that.

The sentence fragment should be connected with a comma. 'News' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Many countries use factory and car ETC.

✓ Many countries use factories and cars, etc.

'Factory' and 'car' should be plural to match 'many countries'. 'ETC.' should be lowercase and preceded by a comma.

× So they have there are many pollution gas exhaust, so many exhaust great.

✓ So there are many pollution gases and exhaust emissions, so the exhaust is great.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'There are' is the correct structure to indicate existence. 'Pollution gas exhaust' should be 'pollution gases and exhaust emissions'. 'Many exhaust great' is unclear; 'the exhaust is great' is a better phrase, though 'great' is vague.

× Yes, because I want to experience other countries climate, especially if my country's weather is wind.

✓ Yes, because I want to experience other countries' climates, especially if my country's weather is windy.

'Countries' should be possessive plural 'countries'' to modify 'climates'. 'Climate' should be plural to match 'countries'. 'Weather is wind' is incorrect; 'weather is windy' is correct.

× I want to go warm weather city because I want to more feel warm, yeah.

✓ I want to go to a warm-weather city because I want to feel warmer.

'Go warm weather city' is missing the preposition 'to' and an article 'a'. 'More feel warm' is incorrect; 'feel warmer' is the correct comparative form. Hyphenate 'warm-weather' as a compound adjective.