天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达稍有错误，如“the South part of the China”应为“the southern part of China”。建议注意冠词的使用和地理表达的准确性，同时可以简化句子使表达更自然。

範例: I live in the southern part of China, where the weather is usually hot and humid. This often makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，如“a South city”应为“a southern city”，“make some snowman”应为“make some snowmen”。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，同时句子结构可以更简洁流畅。

範例: I definitely prefer cold weather because I live in a southern city where it's hot all year round. I have never seen snow before, so if it were cold, I could make snowmen and go skating with my friends.

建議: 回答内容较好，但“make it difficult for my clothes to dry”中主谓不一致，应为“makes it difficult”。建议注意主谓一致，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in my city, rainy days are common, especially in summer. This makes me feel anxious and makes it difficult for my clothes to dry. Therefore, I enjoy outdoor activities more when the weather is dry.

建議: 回答较完整，但“judge whether it has rain”表达不够地道，建议改为“judge whether it will rain”。同时可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I usually don't check the weather forecast. Instead, I look at the sky to judge whether it will rain. However, if I have something important planned, I often check the forecast on my phone in advance.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“are become”应为“have become”，“in my cities”应为“in my city”。句子结构不够连贯，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，并避免重复使用连接词“although”和“but”。

範例: I think climate change has made the weather more unpredictable. For example, about a month ago in my city, the forecast said there would be no rain, but it actually rained heavily for two weeks.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，说明原因或具体想去的地方，避免断句。

範例: Sure, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to experience colder places where I can enjoy snow and winter activities.

× I live in the South part of the China so the weather there is very hot and humid which often makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

✓ I live in the southern part of China, so the weather there is very hot and humid, which often makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

“the South part of the China”中，“the China”错误地使用了定冠词“the”，中国作为专有名词不需要冠词；“South part”应改为“southern part”表示“南部地区”。

× So if the weather is cold, probably I can make some snowman with my friends and skating.

✓ So if the weather is cold, probably I can make some snowmen with my friends and go skating.

“make some snowman”中“snowman”应为复数形式“snowmen”；“and skating”缺少动词，应改为“and go skating”表示“去滑冰”。

× In my city, there are more rainy days, especially in summer, which makes me feel anxious and make it difficult for my clothes to dry.

✓ In my city, there are more rainy days, especially in summer, which makes me feel anxious and makes it difficult for my clothes to dry.

“which makes me feel anxious and make it difficult”中，主语“which”是单数，谓语动词应保持一致，两个动词都应为第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× Usually I just see the sky and judge whether it has rain.

✓ Usually I just look at the sky and judge whether it will rain.

“judge whether it has rain”表达不自然，应该用“judge whether it will rain”表示判断是否会下雨，符合习惯用法。

× I think the changes of climate are become more unpredictable.

✓ I think the changes in climate have become more unpredictable.

“are become”是错误的时态搭配，应使用现在完成时“have become”表示变化已经发生并持续到现在。

× For instance, in my cities about a month ago, although the weather forecast said there wasn't any rain, but in fact there were heavy rain constantly for two weeks.

✓ For instance, in my city about a month ago, although the weather forecast said there wasn't any rain, in fact there was heavy rain constantly for two weeks.

“my cities”应为单数“my city”；“there were heavy rain”中“rain”是不可数名词，谓语动词应为单数“was”。

× Sure. And I especially.

✓ Sure. And I especially would like to.

句子不完整，“And I especially.”缺少谓语，导致句子结构错误，应补充完整表达。