天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác để mô tả thời tiết. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp về khí hậu.

範例: I live in Vietnam, which has a tropical monsoon climate. It is usually hot and sunny throughout the year.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như chia động từ. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và logic hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable even if I wear less clothing.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích thời tiết ẩm ướt.

範例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather is usually very hot, which I don't like. Rainy days feel comfortable and refreshing to me.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về tần suất kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do it before important events, usually a few hours or a day in advance.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh nhầm lẫn giữa các hiện tượng thiên nhiên và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể, có liên quan đến biến đổi khí hậu.

範例: Recently, climate change has caused extreme weather events in Vietnam, such as floods and storms, which have damaged homes and affected people's lives.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và mở rộng câu trả lời một chút.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit Tokyo in Japan in December because it is very cold then, and there might be snow. I love snow, so I want to experience that weather.

× I in my country have to type up weather hot and cold.

✓ In my country, the weather is typically hot and cold.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'type up' and lacks proper subject-verb agreement. 'Weather' is uncountable and should be treated as singular. The phrase 'have to type up' is incorrect in this context; it should be replaced with 'is typically' to describe the weather conditions.

× But in Vietnam has a tropical monsoon climate is so hot and really sunny.

✓ But Vietnam has a tropical monsoon climate, so it is very hot and really sunny.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure. 'In Vietnam has' is incorrect; it should be 'Vietnam has'. Also, the sentence needs a conjunction to connect the clauses properly.

× I prefer cold weather because if it's cold we can wears a lot of clothes to make warm.

✓ I prefer cold weather because if it's cold, we can wear a lot of clothes to keep warm.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'wear', not 'wears'. Also, 'make warm' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep warm'.

× But about hot weather if we put off our clothes it just thought it can be normal like cold weather.

✓ But regarding hot weather, if we take off our clothes, we might think it can be as normal as cold weather.

The phrase 'put off our clothes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take off our clothes'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification. 'It just thought' is incorrect; it should be 'we might think'.

× dry weather does mean it too hot so I don't like hot a lot.

✓ Dry weather means it is too hot, so I don't like hot weather a lot.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'does mean it too hot'. The correct form is 'means it is too hot'. Also, 'hot' should be followed by 'weather' to be clear.

× Wet weather is mean and have a rainy day and you know rainy day is very very comfortable and I love it.

✓ Wet weather means there are rainy days, and you know, rainy days are very comfortable, and I love them.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and sentence structure. 'Is mean' should be 'means'. 'Have a rainy day' should be 'there are rainy days'. Also, pronoun agreement is corrected from 'it' to 'them' referring to 'rainy days'.

× I'm not really in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but if I need to go out for important festival so I will check the weather forecast because before about two hours or just a day.

✓ I'm not really in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but if I need to go out for an important festival, I will check the weather forecast about two hours or just a day before.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'so' after 'important festival'; it should be a comma. Also, 'before about two hours or just a day' is awkward; it should be 'about two hours or just a day before'.

× In Vietnam have already a tsunami last week and it destroy a lot of house trees and animals.

✓ In Vietnam, there was a tsunami last week, and it destroyed a lot of houses, trees, and animals.

The sentence lacks the subject 'there' for 'there was'. 'Destroy' should be in past tense 'destroyed' to match 'last week'. 'House' should be plural 'houses'.

× Of course have some people die about that.

✓ Of course, some people died because of that.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses incorrect verb tense. 'Have some people die' should be 'some people died'. Also, 'about that' is incorrect; 'because of that' is appropriate.

× So I think it's very bad and really washed.

✓ So I think it's very bad and really devastating.

The word 'washed' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'devastating' or 'destructive' to describe the effects of the tsunami.

× Yes, I would like to visit Tokyo in Japan in December, because in that time Tokyo so cold and maybe they will have snow.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Tokyo in Japan in December because at that time Tokyo is very cold and may have snow.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'Tokyo'. 'Maybe they will have snow' is better expressed as 'may have snow' for naturalness.

× So I love snow, so I want to go to that place.

✓ I love snow, so I want to go to that place.

The sentence is correct but can be improved by removing the redundant 'so' at the beginning.