天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子较长且有重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，避免冗余。

範例: I live in Beijing, a northern city in China. The weather is usually dry and sunny, with low humidity. It rarely rains, so people don't often carry umbrellas.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，部分句子结构混乱，且重复。建议使用更简洁明了的句子，避免重复表达。

範例: I prefer cold weather because hot days make me feel uncomfortable, as if I'm burning under the sun. Cold weather is more refreshing and easier to bear.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不连贯。建议完整表达观点，注意句子完整性和流畅性。

範例: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. Also, it's hard to keep things dry when it's wet.

建議: 回答较自然，但有重复和语法错误。建议减少重复，使用更准确的表达，句子更简洁。

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before going out. It's important to know if it will rain, so I can prepare accordingly.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，有重复词汇和语法错误。建议条理清晰，完整表达观点，避免重复。

範例: I think climate change causes global warming, making the weather hotter than before. Pollution from factories also worsens the environment.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，注意语法和连贯性。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. It would be a unique experience, even if I'm not used to the weather there.

× it's often dry and not have a lot of moisture or humidity

✓ it's often dry and does not have a lot of moisture or humidity

这里主语是第三人称单数"it"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"does not have"，而不是"not have"。

× don't need to worry about bringing umbrella out

✓ don't need to worry about bringing an umbrella out

"umbrella"是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词"an"。

× when you are in a hot day

✓ when you are on a hot day

表示某一天时，应该用介词"on"，而不是"in"。

× it feels like you're in a hot pot just boiling you

✓ it feels like you're in a hot pot just being boiled

这里需要被动语态表达"被煮沸"，且"boiling you"结构不正确，应改为"being boiled"。

× Wet weather feels like you're you're sweaty all over your body

✓ Wet weather feels like you're sweaty all over your body

"you're"重复出现，应删除多余的一个。

× you can't even have a dry hand to to hold others

✓ you can't even have a dry hand to hold others' hands

"hold others"不完整，应补充为"hold others' hands"，表示握住别人的手。

× checking weather report

✓ checking the weather report

"weather report"前需要加定冠词"the"，表示特指天气预报。

× if the day is gonna rain

✓ if it is going to rain that day

"the day is gonna rain"结构不正确，应使用"it is going to rain that day"，"it"指代天气情况。

× the weather is becoming more and more hotter these days

✓ the weather is becoming hotter and hotter these days

"more and more hotter"是重复比较，应改为"hotter and hotter"。

× factory pollutions

✓ factory pollution

"pollution"是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。

× Although I may be not used to it, but it's fun and and impressive to enjoy things like that

✓ Although I may not be used to it, it's fun and impressive to enjoy things like that

"Although"和"but"不能同时使用，且"may be not"应改为"may not be"。