天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'actually the weather is very pleasant over here' and then 'It's really very pleasant time', you can combine these ideas. Also, clarify the location name correctly (Dhaka instead of Taka).

範例: I live in Dhaka, Bangladesh, where the weather is generally pleasant because we have six distinct seasons. Among them, I prefer the rainy season the most since the temperature is cooler than in the hot season, and it rains occasionally, making the atmosphere very refreshing.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid repetition like 'really, really'. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer cold weather because during the cold season, I can wear warm clothes comfortably. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel tired and exhausted quickly when I go outside.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear at the end. Avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences properly. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

範例: It depends on the situation. For serious work like going to the office, I prefer dry weather because it is more convenient. However, when I am free and it rains, I enjoy getting wet and find it refreshing.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has repetition ('run run'). Try to complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, explain clearly when and why you check the weather forecast using linking words.

範例: I usually don't check the weather forecast often because I commute by car. However, I run every morning for exercise, so I always check the forecast before going out to avoid running in the rain.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific details. Try to finish your thoughts and provide clear examples. Use linking words to explain the effects logically.

範例: I think climate change has caused temperatures to rise gradually, leading to drastic changes in weather patterns. For example, Bangladesh used to have six distinct seasons, but now these seasons are less noticeable and more unpredictable.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetitions. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Provide more specific details about your experience and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I visited Kunming, China, where the weather is like spring all year round. It was very comfortable, and I really enjoyed the pleasant climate there.

× I live in Bangladesh and especially in Taka, actually the weather is very pleasant over here.

✓ I live in Bangladesh and especially in Dhaka; actually, the weather is very pleasant over here.

The city name 'Taka' is incorrect; the correct name is 'Dhaka'. This is a proper noun correction rather than a grammar issue, but it affects clarity and correctness.

× We have six seasons.

✓ We have six seasons.

This sentence is correct; 'seasons' is plural as it should be.

× During the season, the temperature is a little bit lower than the hot season and it's rains now and then.

✓ During the season, the temperature is a little bit lower than the hot season and it rains now and then.

The phrase 'it's rains' is incorrect because 'rains' is a verb and should not be combined with 'it's'. The correct form is 'it rains' to indicate the weather condition.

× It's really very pleasant time.

✓ It's really a very pleasant time.

The phrase 'pleasant time' needs an article 'a' before it because 'time' is a singular countable noun in this context.

× Obviously I like cold weather because during the cold season you can wear something to feel warm, but in the hot weather when you go out, it's really, really tiresome and you get tired, exhausted very easily and.

✓ Obviously, I like cold weather because during the cold season you can wear something to feel warm, but in hot weather, when you go out, it's really, really tiresome and you get tired and exhausted very easily.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Also, 'exhausted' should be connected properly with 'tired' using 'and'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Well, it depends. If I go to some serious work, like going to office, I like the dry weather. But if I am just casually going somewhere and it's it rains and I really like it and I like to get myself wet and I like to.

✓ Well, it depends. If I go to some serious work, like going to the office, I like dry weather. But if I am just casually going somewhere and it rains, I really like it; I like to get myself wet.

The sentence has repetition and incomplete thoughts. 'It's it rains' is incorrect; it should be 'it rains'. The phrase 'I like to' is incomplete and should be finished or removed. Added 'the' before 'office' for correctness.

× Usually I commute by my car so I don't see the weather for the forecast so often.

✓ Usually, I commute by my car, so I don't check the weather forecast so often.

The phrase 'see the weather for the forecast' is awkward. The correct phrase is 'check the weather forecast'. Added commas for clarity.

× But when I go for exercise in the morning I like to run run everyday. So at that time I always try to check the weather before going out because during the just after the.

✓ But when I go for exercise in the morning, I like to run every day. So at that time, I always try to check the weather before going out because of the weather conditions.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition ('run run'). 'Everyday' should be 'every day' as two words when meaning each day. The last part is incomplete and unclear; corrected to a complete thought.

× The temperature is increasing day by day and the climate is changing drastically, and for example, previously in Bangladesh it felt different in six different seasons, but nowadays I feel that there are.

✓ The temperature is increasing day by day and the climate is changing drastically. For example, previously in Bangladesh, it felt different in six different seasons, but nowadays I feel that there are fewer distinct seasons.

The sentence ends abruptly. Added 'fewer distinct seasons' to complete the thought. Added commas for clarity.

× Yes, I definitely like to visit where there the weather is different.

✓ Yes, I definitely like to visit places where the weather is different.

The phrase 'where there the weather' is incorrect. It should be 'places where the weather' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Like I, I was in Kunming, China, the weather was like springtime and I heard that it is always like this and the weather was very comfortable and there was and I like the.

✓ For example, I was in Kunming, China. The weather was like springtime, and I heard that it is always like this. The weather was very comfortable, and I liked it.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Reconstructed into complete sentences for clarity and correctness.