天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence clarity, for example, 'the wheels look quite nice due to weather' is unclear. Use precise vocabulary and keep sentences concise and relevant.

範例: The weather in Kathmandu is very pleasant throughout the year. It is neither too hot nor too cold during any season. One of the best things about living here is the limited rainfall, which makes the environment comfortable and enjoyable.

建議: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds like 'uh'. Structure your answer clearly by stating your preference first, then giving reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid confusing phrases.

範例: I don't have a strong preference between hot or cold weather, but if I had to choose, I would prefer cold weather. Although it can be freezing, wearing warm clothes helps maintain body temperature. I also enjoy the summer season a lot.

建議: Reduce the use of filler words to improve fluency. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. For example, explain why rain makes you feel calm and then mention the downside to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I personally prefer wet weather because I love rain. Watching raindrops form on trees, leaves, and flowers is fascinating. Moreover, the rain makes me feel very calm, although I dislike being late because of it.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and filler words. Also, clarify your sentences for better understanding. For example, explain the app's usefulness clearly and keep your answer concise and direct.

範例: I always check the weather forecast before leaving home. When I lived abroad, I used an app that provided accurate weather updates. This helped me plan my day better, so I continue to check the forecast regularly.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary and structure your answer logically. Provide specific examples and explain their impact clearly to improve coherence and effectiveness.

範例: I believe the main effect of climate change is global warming. Many people do not realize how activities like burning fossil fuels and littering harm the environment. These actions contribute significantly to environmental damage and climate change.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'Will the place that I leave' to 'The place where I live'.

範例: The place where I live does not have snowfall, but if I travel to another country like Switzerland, I would love to visit. I want to experience the cold weather, see how comfortable it is to stay outside, and enjoy the snowy views.

× It is one of the most pleasant weathers in the world.

✓ It is one of the most pleasant weathers in the world.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. The phrase 'most pleasant weathers' is incorrect. It should be 'most pleasant weather' to be grammatically correct.

× the wheels look quite nice due to weather.

✓ the views look quite nice due to the weather.

The word 'wheels' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'views'. Also, 'weather' as an uncountable noun should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to specific weather conditions.

× But I'm not preferably someone who prefers either hot or cold weather, but you have, I have to choose one.

✓ But I'm not particularly someone who prefers either hot or cold weather, but if I have to choose one,

The word 'preferably' is an adverb meaning 'ideally' and is incorrectly used here. The correct adverb is 'particularly' to express a specific preference. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× you can dare observe there yourself with warm clothes, uh, which helps you to, to maintain the body temperature.

✓ you can dare to observe there yourself with warm clothes, which help you to maintain your body temperature.

The verb 'dare' can be followed by 'to' plus the base verb or just the base verb. Here, 'dare to observe' is correct. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'warm clothes'. 'Your body temperature' is more natural than 'the body temperature'.

× I personally hit summer, summer season a lot.

✓ I personally like the summer season a lot.

The phrase 'hit summer' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'like the summer season'. Also, 'summer season' is singular and should be preceded by 'the'.

× I love watching uh, how the rain droplets, uh, are formed in the trees and the leaves and in the flowers.

✓ I love watching how the raindrops form on the trees, leaves, and flowers.

The phrase 'rain droplets are formed in the trees' is awkward. 'Raindrops form on the trees' is more natural. Also, 'rain droplets' is better expressed as 'raindrops'. The preposition 'on' is more appropriate than 'in' here.

× Well, I am that sort of person who always, uh, who always checks the weather before heading out of the home.

✓ Well, I am the sort of person who always checks the weather before heading out of the house.

The phrase 'heading out of the home' is unnatural. The correct phrase is 'heading out of the house'. Also, 'that sort of person' is better as 'the sort of person' in this context.

× when I used to live in a live, uh, in live abroad, umm, there was this umm, app which we used to give, uh, give the accurate weather.

✓ when I used to live abroad, there was an app that used to give accurate weather information.

The phrase 'live in a live, in live abroad' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'live abroad'. Also, 'app which we used to give' is incorrect; it should be 'app that used to give'. 'Accurate weather information' is more natural than 'accurate weather'.

× throwing a garbage everywhere, it, uh, effects a lot in, of a lot in our environment.

✓ throwing garbage everywhere affects our environment a lot.

'Garbage' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article 'a'. The verb 'effects' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'affects'. The phrase 'in, of a lot in' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'a lot'.

× Will the place that I leave, uh, does not have snowfall, but if I were to travel someday, uh, in another country, uh, just like Switzerland, I would definitely love to visit there.

✓ The place where I live does not have snowfall, but if I were to travel someday to another country, like Switzerland, I would definitely love to visit there.

The phrase 'Will the place that I leave' is incorrect; it should be 'The place where I live'. Also, 'travel someday in another country' should be 'travel someday to another country'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.