天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法有些错误，如“out do some outdoor activities”应为“doing some outdoor activities”。建议注意动词形式和介词搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: It's summer now, so the weather is usually very hot and humid due to frequent rain. I enjoy this weather because it allows me to spend more time doing outdoor activities.

建議: 回答中动词形式错误，如“spend more time do”应为“spend more time doing”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

範例: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time doing outdoor activities, such as visiting the sea where I can swim and relax.

建議: 回答中存在主谓一致错误，如“wet weather always make”应为“wet weather always makes”。建议注意语法细节，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet weather always makes me feel uncomfortable, and my clothes take a long time to dry, which is quite inconvenient.

建議: 回答中表达不够简洁，且“go to outside”应为“go outside”。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast, but if I have outdoor plans, I check it in advance, usually the day before.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“climate change have”应为“climate change has”，且重复“I”。建议注意语法和避免重复，同时提供更具体的影响细节。

範例: I think climate change has many effects. For example, I have noticed that the weather has become hotter compared to the past, which affects agriculture and daily life.

建議: 回答中表达不够流畅，如“other cities climate”应为“other cities' climates”，且“I'll for example”不自然。建议使用更连贯的句子结构。

範例: Yes, of course. I would like to experience the climates of other cities. For example, I want to feel the cool weather in Yunnan province, which would be very interesting.

× I love this weather because I can spend more time out do some outdoor activities.

✓ I love this weather because I can spend more time out doing some outdoor activities.

动词后面接动名词形式（doing）表示正在进行的动作，原句中缺少动名词形式，导致语法错误。

× I prefer hot weather because during this weather you can spend more time do some outside activities like visiting the sea where you can swim.

✓ I prefer hot weather because during this weather you can spend more time doing some outside activities like visiting the sea where you can swim.

动词后面应接动名词doing，表示动作的持续，原句中使用了动词原形do，语法错误。

× wet weather always make me feel uncomfortable and my clothes are always hard to dry so I need to spend time making it dry.

✓ wet weather always makes me feel uncomfortable and my clothes are always hard to dry so I need to spend time making them dry.

主语wet weather是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。

× No, I don't have this habit, but sometimes when I need to go to outside for some activities I would check the weather in advance like before that day.

✓ No, I don't have this habit, but sometimes when I need to go outside for some activities I would check the weather in advance like before that day.

go to outside中的to是不必要的，go outside是固定搭配，去掉to更符合英语习惯。

× I think climate change have a lot of influences.

✓ I think climate change has a lot of influences.

climate change是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has。

× I I feel that the weather is becoming hotter compared to the past time.

✓ I feel that the weather is becoming hotter compared to the past.

past time用法不当，通常用past表示过去，去掉time更自然。

× Yes, of course I want to experience other cities climate.

✓ Yes, of course I want to experience other cities' climate.

表示所属关系时，cities应加所有格's，表示“其他城市的气候”。

× I'll for example, I want to feel the cool, cool weather in Yunnan province.

✓ For example, I want to feel the cool, cool weather in Yunnan province.

句子结构混乱，I'll用法不当，应去掉，直接用For example引出例子。