天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免使用不自然或不恰当的比喻，如“wet frog climbing on your skin”，这会影响表达的自然性和得体性。建议使用更贴切且自然的描述，同时注意语法和句子连贯性。

範例: The weather in my city is humid throughout the year. It often feels sticky and uncomfortable, but the temperature is moderate, not too hot in summer or too cold in winter, which I quite like.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“undress for his”和“make me feel disgust”。建议使用完整且正确的句子表达观点，并避免重复和口语化的填充词。

範例: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to dress warmly, but in hot weather, I often sweat a lot, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子断裂且表达不完整。建议使用连贯的句子结构，清晰表达观点，并使用连接词使内容更流畅。

範例: I don't like either dry or wet weather. In dry weather, I need to use cream to keep my skin moisturized, while in wet weather, I sweat a lot, which makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“prove some umbrella”。建议完整表达观点，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day so that I can decide how to dress and whether to bring an umbrella or use sunscreen.

建議: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议使用完整句子，清楚描述观点，并提供具体例子。

範例: I think extreme weather events have increased recently. For example, summers are getting hotter each year, and winters feel colder than before.

建議: 回答中断断续续，语法错误明显。建议使用连贯的句子表达完整的想法，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

範例: Of course, I would like to visit a city with mild weather, where summers are not too hot and winters are not too cold. Sometimes it rains, but not heavily.

× It just feels like there are some wet frog climbing on your skin that's really sticky and disgusting.

✓ It just feels like there are some wet frogs climbing on your skin that are really sticky and disgusting.

这里“frog”应为复数形式“frogs”，因为前面用了“some”，表示不止一只青蛙，主谓一致需要复数形式。

× But I think in our city, the weather won't be too hot at summer and won't be too cold on the winter.

✓ But I think in our city, the weather won't be too hot in summer and won't be too cold in winter.

表示季节时，英语中通常用介词“in”而不是“at”或“on”。“in summer”“in winter”是固定搭配。

× Yeah, you can dress for cold, but you can't undress for his, yeah.

✓ Yeah, you can dress for cold, but you can't undress for this, yeah.

这里“his”是错误的代词，应该用指示代词“this”来指代前面提到的天气。

× That's really sticky and make me feel disgust.

✓ That's really sticky and makes me feel disgusted.

“make”主语是单数“that”，动词应加-s变为“makes”；“disgust”是名词，表达“感到厌恶”应使用形容词“disgusted”。

× Well, I don't like both of them because in the dry weather. I should. Use some cream to keep wet off my skin.

✓ Well, I don't like either of them because in dry weather, I should use some cream to keep moisture off my skin.

“both”用于肯定句，否定句应用“either”；“keep wet off”表达不准确，应为“keep moisture off”表示防止皮肤干燥。

× But in the wet weather, I may sweat a lot that made my skin sticky and uncomfortable.

✓ But in wet weather, I may sweat a lot, which makes my skin sticky and uncomfortable.

“that made”时态不对，应使用现在时“which makes”来说明因果关系；“wet weather”前不加冠词。

× Yes, I check it for every day because with checking them, I will know how I dress tomorrow and whether I should prove some umbrella or use some cream to prevent the sunlight.

✓ Yes, I check it every day because by checking it, I will know how to dress tomorrow and whether I should bring an umbrella or use some cream to protect against sunlight.

“for every day”应为“every day”；“with checking them”表达不自然，应为“by checking it”；“prove some umbrella”错误，应为“bring an umbrella”；“prevent the sunlight”应为“protect against sunlight”。

× I think some extreme weather become more and more.

✓ I think some extreme weather becomes more and more frequent.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”，动词应为单数“becomes”；句子不完整，补充“frequent”使表达完整。

× Every year I feel hotter than last year and in the winter I will feel it colder.

✓ Every year I feel hotter than last year, and in winter I feel colder.

“will feel”不合适，描述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时“feel”；“in the winter”可简化为“in winter”。

× Always cold off. Fruit than last year.

✓ It's always colder than last year.

原句不完整且词语错误，应改为完整句子“It's always colder than last year.”，“cold off”错误，“fruit”无关。

× Of course, I'd like to visit in a city that have mild. Weather.

✓ Of course, I'd like to visit a city that has mild weather.

“a city”是单数，谓语动词应为“has”；“visit in a city”中“in”多余，应去掉。

× It won't have. Would be too hot in the summer and it won't be too cold in the winter.

✓ It won't be too hot in the summer and it won't be too cold in the winter.

“It won't have. Would be”结构错误，应直接用“won't be”表示否定将来时。

× And sometime it have rain, but won't be. A big ring.

✓ And sometimes it has rain, but it won't be a big rain.

“sometime”应为副词“sometimes”；“it have”应为“it has”；“ring”应为“rain”。