天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, say 'I live in a hot place because it is near the Tropic of Cancer, which causes high temperatures. Generally, the globe's hottest places are near this line.' Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'traffic of cancer' and 'it usually knows that the glove is the most hotter place.'

範例: I live in a hot area because it is close to the Tropic of Cancer, which makes the weather very warm. Usually, places near this line are among the hottest in the world.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Instead of 'hot sauce', say 'hot weather'. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific. For example, 'I prefer cold weather because we have hot weather all year round with lots of sunshine. I would like to experience some cold, snow, and rain for a change.'

範例: I prefer cold weather because we have hot weather and sunshine almost all the time. I would like to experience some cold days, snow, and rain to enjoy a different climate.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and less humid. When it is dry, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or feeling sticky. Wet weather can make me feel uncomfortable sometimes.' Avoid unclear phrases like 'play with her' and incomplete sentences.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and less humid. I can go outside without worrying about rain or feeling sticky. Wet weather often makes me feel uncomfortable.

建議: Use clear and complete sentences. For example, 'I do not usually check the weather forecast, but sometimes when the sky is cloudy, I check it to see if it will rain. This helps me plan my activities and enjoy my day.' Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'do a plants'.

範例: I usually do not check the weather forecast, but when it looks cloudy, I check to see if it will rain. This way, I can plan my day and enjoy outdoor activities.

建議: Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, 'I do not know much about climate change, but I think it causes many negative effects, such as melting ice and rising sea levels.' Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words like 'climbing today' and 'Ice Ice Mountain being.'

範例: I do not have much information about climate change, but I believe it causes many bad effects, like melting ice and rising sea levels.

建議: Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, 'Yes, I would like to visit European cities because they have cooler and cloudier weather. I think I would enjoy the change since I live in a very hot place.' Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'had to fall too seriously.'

範例: Yes, I want to visit European cities because their weather is cooler and cloudier. It would be nice to experience a different climate from my hot hometown.

× In online we have a hot weather because we are near to the traffic of cancer and this is cause hot weather and it usually knows that the glove is the most hotter place.

✓ Online, we have hot weather because we are near the Tropic of Cancer, and this causes hot weather. It is usually known that the globe is the hottest place.

The phrase 'near to the traffic of cancer' is incorrect; it should be 'near the Tropic of Cancer' (correct preposition and proper noun). 'This is cause hot weather' should be 'this causes hot weather' to use the correct verb form. 'It usually knows that the glove is the most hotter place' is incorrect; it should be 'It is usually known that the globe is the hottest place' to use passive voice and correct superlative form.

× Of course I prefer cold weather because all time we have hot sauce and also we often have the sun, so we want to change.

✓ Of course, I prefer cold weather because all the time we have hot sun and also we often have sunshine, so we want a change.

'All time' should be 'all the time' to correctly express frequency. 'Hot sauce' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'hot sun' or 'hot weather'. 'We want to change' is vague; 'we want a change' is clearer.

× I prefer to play with her because it's feel more comfortable and less humid.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and less humid.

'Play with her' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'dry weather'. 'It's feel' is incorrect; should be 'it feels' to agree in number and tense.

× When the weather is dry I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or feeling sticky.

✓ When the weather is dry, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or feeling sticky.

Missing comma after introductory clause for clarity.

× Also what would have come cool thing down? It also makes me feel uncomfortable and sometimes cause.

✓ Also, what would cool things down? It also makes me feel uncomfortable and sometimes causes problems.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What would have come cool thing down?' is incorrect; should be 'what would cool things down?'. 'Sometimes cause' is incomplete; needs an object like 'causes problems'.

× No I am not but sometimes when the weather get cloudy I I I check it because I don't know if there will be rain or not so I can do a plants that I can go and go and enjoy.

✓ No, I am not, but sometimes when the weather gets cloudy, I check it because I don't know if there will be rain or not, so I can make plans to go out and enjoy.

'Weather get' should be 'weather gets' for subject-verb agreement. 'Do a plants' is incorrect; should be 'make plans'. Repetition of 'I' and 'go and go' is unnecessary and corrected for clarity.

× Actually I don't have the information about climbing today but I think it's cause a lot of effect and they are bad and like.

✓ Actually, I don't have information about climate change today, but I think it causes a lot of effects and they are bad.

'Climbing today' is incorrect; likely meant 'climate change'. 'Cause a lot of effect' should be 'causes a lot of effects'. 'And like' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× Ice Ice Mountain being.

✓ Ice and snow on the mountains are melting.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A proper sentence is provided to convey the intended meaning about ice melting on mountains.

× Yes, I would like to visit European cities because they also have cloudy weather and I think I will be enjoying there because we we are in a hot place that had to fall too seriously.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit European cities because they also have cloudy weather, and I think I will enjoy being there because we are in a hot place that has to cool down seriously.

'I will be enjoying there' should be 'I will enjoy being there' for correct verb form and preposition. 'Had to fall too seriously' is incorrect; likely meant 'has to cool down seriously' to express the need for cooler weather.