天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise, not exceeding five sentences.

範例: I live in a busy city where the weather changes throughout the year. Summers are warm but not too hot, perfect for enjoying the beaches and parties. In winter, we sometimes get a little snow, which is quite enjoyable. During the rainy season, the rain adds a refreshing atmosphere. Overall, the weather here offers a variety of experiences.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some incomplete or unclear parts. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your response coherent.

範例: I like both cold and hot weather, but I prefer hot weather more. This is because I enjoy water activities such as river rafting and bungee jumping, which are easier to do in warm weather. However, hiking in winter is difficult due to the cold, so I don't enjoy cold weather as much.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer dry weather because I enjoy outdoor activities. In dry conditions, it is easier and safer to play games and participate in sports. However, during rainy or winter seasons, the ground becomes wet and slippery, making outdoor activities difficult and less enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with clear sentences. Explain when and how often you check the weather forecast, and why it is important for you. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially before travelling. Since I like to visit many places, I check the forecast daily to plan my activities accordingly. This helps me decide what to wear and which outdoor activities I can safely enjoy.

建議: Your answer covers important points but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use specific examples and linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain the effects clearly. Avoid vague phrases and try to be more precise.

範例: Climate change has affected everyone's life in many ways. Due to global warming, glaciers are melting, which increases the risk of floods. Sometimes, it causes severe droughts, while other times, heavy flooding occurs. These changes also negatively impact agriculture, reducing crop yields.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'where the IT is very difficult'.

範例: I enjoy exploring new places, especially those with different climates from my hometown. I want to experience challenging weather conditions where it is hard for people to live. For example, I am planning to visit a very cold city to understand how people adapt to low temperatures.

× Well, I live in a busy so here the weather is really awesome.

✓ Well, I live in a busy city so here the weather is really awesome.

The word 'busy' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. 'City' is the correct singular noun to complete the phrase. Without the noun, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× So in the whole year there are ample number of weathers.

✓ So in the whole year there are an ample number of weather types.

The noun 'weather' is uncountable and does not have a plural form 'weathers'. To express variety, use 'weather types' or 'kinds of weather'. Also, 'an' is needed before 'ample number'.

× Like in summers it's not too much hot, it's good weather to enjoy the beaches and doing some parties over there as well as in winter.

✓ Like in summers it's not too hot, it's good weather to enjoy the beaches and have some parties over there as well as in winter.

After 'to enjoy the beaches and', the verb should be in base form 'have' not 'doing'. Using 'doing' here is incorrect because it does not follow the parallel structure with 'enjoy'.

× So one can easily enjoy a little bit snow as well as during the time of rainy season 1 can easily enjoy the rain because that's really enjoyable.

✓ So one can easily enjoy a little bit of snow as well as during the rainy season one can easily enjoy the rain because that's really enjoyable.

'Snow' is uncountable and needs 'a little bit of' instead of 'a little bit snow'. Also, 'rainy season' needs the definite article 'the' before it. The number '1' should be replaced with the pronoun 'one'.

× Well to be honest I basically I like both but my majority of reference gave to the hot weather because in my weather I love do ******** and do a lot of water activities like river rafting and bungee jumping and so on.

✓ Well to be honest, I basically like both but my preference is mostly for hot weather because in my weather I love to do ******** and do a lot of water activities like river rafting and bungee jumping and so on.

'My majority of reference gave to' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'my preference is mostly for'. Also, 'I love do' should be 'I love to do' to correctly use the infinitive form after 'love'.

× Basically also like the hiking in winter is not too much possible because it's too cold and one cannot easily enjoy the cold these things.

✓ Basically, I also like hiking but in winter it is not very possible because it's too cold and one cannot easily enjoy these cold things.

'Not too much possible' is incorrect; 'not very possible' or 'not really possible' is better. Also, 'the hiking' should be 'hiking' without 'the'. The phrase 'enjoy the cold these things' is awkward; 'enjoy these cold things' is clearer.

× Well, as I already mentioned, I like the dry weather because I like outdoor activities.

✓ Well, as I already mentioned, I like dry weather because I like outdoor activities.

'The dry weather' is acceptable but generally 'dry weather' without 'the' is more natural when speaking generally about weather types.

× So in dry weather 1 can easily enjoy all these outdoor activities which is not too much possibly in winter or rain because at that time everything is wet and slippery and one can not easily enjoy the outdoor games and anything like that.

✓ So in dry weather one can easily enjoy all these outdoor activities which are not very possible in winter or rain because at that time everything is wet and slippery and one cannot easily enjoy outdoor games and anything like that.

'1' should be 'one'. 'Which is not too much possibly' is incorrect; it should be 'which are not very possible' to agree with plural 'activities'. 'Can not' should be 'cannot' as one word.

× Well, I am a travelling bus, so I usually like to travel a lot of places.

✓ Well, I am a travelling person, so I usually like to travel to a lot of places.

'Travelling bus' is incorrect; the speaker likely meant 'travelling person'. Also, 'travel a lot of places' should be 'travel to a lot of places' to use the correct preposition.

× Over the castle of my life I visited ample number of places and that's why I on my regular basis I checked the weather from the northeast for the next day.

✓ Over the course of my life I have visited an ample number of places and that's why I regularly check the weather forecast for the next day.

'Over the castle of my life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'over the course of my life'. 'I on my regular basis I checked' is redundant and incorrect; 'I regularly check' is better. 'Weather from the northeast' is unclear; 'weather forecast' is appropriate.

× Because whenever I have to go somewhere, so checking weather is more comfortable me.

✓ Because whenever I have to go somewhere, checking the weather is more comfortable for me.

'So' is unnecessary after 'because'. 'Checking weather is more comfortable me' is incorrect; it should be 'checking the weather is more comfortable for me' to include the article and preposition.

× So what I need to be like where I need to go like when the battery is just prefer to indirect activities.

✓ So I need to know where I need to go and when, so that I can prefer indoor activities.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems the speaker wants to express the need to know destination and time to plan activities. 'Battery' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'weather'. 'Indirect activities' should be 'indoor activities'.

× Well there are ample number of climate change effects on everyone's life.

✓ Well, there are an ample number of climate change effects on everyone's life.

'Ample number' requires the article 'an' before it. Also, 'climate change effects' is acceptable as plural here.

× Recently due to huge global warming the ice become melt from the glacier.

✓ Recently, due to huge global warming, the ice has melted from the glacier.

'Become melt' is incorrect. The correct past participle form is 'has melted'. Present perfect tense 'has melted' is appropriate to describe recent events.

× That's why it's the more chance to do flood and everything.

✓ That's why there is a higher chance of flooding and other related events.

'It's the more chance to do flood' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'there is a higher chance of flooding'. 'Do flood' is not correct usage.

× Also sometime it's depend on the weather, sometimes it goes too much drought and sometimes it's too good flooding as well as it's also effect agriculture.

✓ Also, sometimes it depends on the weather; sometimes there is severe drought and sometimes there is heavy flooding, and it also affects agriculture.

'It's depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'Too much drought' and 'too good flooding' are incorrect; use 'severe drought' and 'heavy flooding'. 'It's also effect' should be 'it also affects'.

× Well, I like to explore a lot of places.

✓ Well, I like to explore a lot of places.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× So basically sometime I like to visit another places where there is different weather because I also want to try the different weathers where the IT is very difficult for people to survive.

✓ So basically, sometimes I like to visit other places where there is different weather because I also want to try different weathers where it is very difficult for people to survive.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Another places' is incorrect; use 'other places' for plural. 'The different weathers' should be 'different weathers' without 'the'. 'IT' should be 'it'.

× And now I'm planning to go to somewhere where the temperature is too low because I want to explore that weather when there is hard to live.

✓ And now I'm planning to go somewhere where the temperature is very low because I want to explore that weather where it is hard to live.

'Go to somewhere' should be 'go somewhere'. 'When there is hard to live' is incorrect; it should be 'where it is hard to live'. 'Too low' is acceptable but 'very low' is more natural here.