天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子稍长且有重复表达“summer vacation”和“high temperatures”，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余。

範例: The weather where I live is usually very hot in summer, often scorching. Because of this, I prefer to stay indoors to avoid sweating.

建議: 回答表达了观点并给出理由，但句子断裂（"I think it's. Very uncomfortable."），影响流畅性。建议注意句子完整性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating in summer, which is very uncomfortable. Besides, I enjoy snow in winter and sometimes go skating.

建議: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，使用了连接词“also”，表达自然。建议可以增加更多细节使内容更丰富。

範例: I prefer dry weather because clothes dry faster, which is very convenient. Also, dry weather makes me feel more comfortable when I walk outside.

建議: 回答表达清晰且有逻辑，但句子较长，建议适当分句并使用连接词提高表达流畅度。

範例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I find the weather unpredictable. I prefer to experience it firsthand rather than rely on forecasts.

建議: 回答内容相关且有因果关系，但“summer vacation”重复出现且表达略显简单，建议丰富词汇并避免重复。

範例: I believe climate change has had a significant impact recently, especially in summer when temperatures are higher than before due to increased greenhouse gases.

建議: 回答表达了愿望和原因，但句子稍显冗长且重复“summer vacation”，建议简化并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because the weather in my city is very hot in summer. Experiencing a cooler climate would make my vacation more enjoyable.

× Actually I prefer cold weather because I really hate sweating during the summer vacation and I think it's. Very uncomfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer cold weather because I really hate sweating during the summer vacation and I think it's very uncomfortable.

句子中“it's.”后面不应有句号，且“Very”不应大写，导致句子结构不完整。应将句号去掉并将“Very”改为小写，形成完整连贯的句子。

× No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I find the weather is unpredictable and changeable so I prefer to experience first hand instead of relying on the weather forecast.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I find the weather unpredictable and changeable, so I prefer to experience it firsthand instead of relying on the weather forecast.

“find the weather is unpredictable”中“is”多余，英语中“find”后可直接接形容词作宾语补足语；“first hand”应写作一个词“firsthand”；句子中缺少逗号，导致句子连接不清晰。

× The temperature is hotter than before and this is caused by the increase in greenhouse gases.

✓ The temperature is hotter than before, and this has been caused by the increase in greenhouse gases.

“this is caused”时态不准确，描述最近几年气候变化应使用现在完成时“has been caused”，表示动作对现在的影响；另外，两个并列句之间应加逗号。