天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Hava durumunu anlatırken gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hatalarından kaçının. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak etkili bir yanıt verebilirsiniz.

範例: I live in Ankara, the capital of Turkey. The weather here is usually cold and rainy, especially these days. Whenever I go outside, I feel the chill immediately.

建議: Cümlenizi daha doğal hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat ederek daha akıcı bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

範例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy summer and going to the sea. I like swimming in the pool during summer more than in winter since I do many activities then.

建議: Cevabınızda konudan sapmalar ve tekrarlar var. Daha net ve doğrudan cevap verin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlamlı yaparak anlatımınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my hair messy. Although I need an umbrella when it rains, I usually don't like carrying one.

建議: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir şekilde, alışkanlıklarınızı açıkça ifade edin ve gereksiz kelimelerden kaçının.

範例: Yes, I always check the weather forecast every morning on Google before I get dressed. It helps me plan my day better.

建議: Cümlenizde anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak görüşünüzü net bir şekilde belirtmelisiniz.

範例: I believe climate change has negative effects worldwide. In Turkey, the weather has become hotter recently due to global warming.

建議: Cevabınızda anlam bütünlüğü ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak daha etkili bir yanıt verin.

範例: I might like to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather. However, I prefer the weather in Ankara because it's cold but not too rainy.

× in Ankara the weather is very cold and every day is raining

✓ in Ankara the weather is very cold and it rains every day

The phrase 'every day is raining' is incorrect because 'every day' is a time expression and cannot be the subject of 'is raining'. The correct form is 'it rains every day' to indicate habitual action.

× When I go to outside it's already cold

✓ When I go outside it's already cold

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'outside'. The correct phrase is 'go outside' without 'to'.

× I like swimming the pool in the summer better than the winter

✓ I like swimming in the pool in the summer better than in the winter

The verb 'swimming' requires the preposition 'in' before 'the pool'. Also, 'than the winter' should be 'than in the winter' to maintain parallel structure.

× because in summer lot of activity I'm doing

✓ because in summer I do a lot of activities

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. The correct sentence places the subject 'I' before the verb 'do' and uses 'a lot of activities' as the object.

× Actually I prefer driving there because in in the wet weather my hair is messy

✓ Actually I prefer driving there because in wet weather my hair is messy

The phrase 'in in the wet weather' has a repeated preposition and unnecessary article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'in wet weather'.

× when I go outside and weather is rainy I don't want to take umbrella but I it's necessary but I don't want any

✓ when I go outside and the weather is rainy I don't want to take an umbrella but it's necessary and I don't want one

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'weather' and the indefinite article 'an' before 'umbrella'. Also, 'I it's necessary' is incorrect; it should be 'it's necessary'. 'I don't want any' should be 'I don't want one' to refer to the umbrella.

× I wear the for for the weather forecast

✓ I dress according to the weather forecast

The phrase 'I wear the for for the weather forecast' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct expression is 'I dress according to the weather forecast' to indicate adjusting clothing based on forecast.

× Every day I check in the weather forecast

✓ Every day I check the weather forecast

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'check the weather forecast'.

× global warming is improved and climate changing is in recent years

✓ global warming has increased and climate change has occurred in recent years

The phrase 'global warming is improved' is incorrect; 'improved' implies positive change, but global warming is negative. 'Climate changing is' is ungrammatical; the noun 'climate change' should be used with appropriate verb tense.

× See the other cities climates

✓ Seeing the climates of other cities

The original phrase is a fragment and lacks proper sentence structure. The corrected phrase uses the gerund 'Seeing' and proper possessive form 'climates of other cities'.

× I think I like my weather I don't want

✓ I think I like my weather and I don't want to change it

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks conjunction and verb to complete the thought. Adding 'and I don't want to change it' clarifies the meaning.