天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免犹豫词汇如“Uh”，并且表达更准确自然。例如“it rains almost two or five days a week”表达不清，应具体说明频率。

範例: I live in Guangdong province, where the weather is usually rainy and humid. It rains about two to five days every week, especially during the rainy season.

建議: 回答应更简洁自然，避免重复“can”，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I obviously prefer hot weather because I can stay cool indoors with air conditioning. Also, if I go outside, I can easily find places like shopping malls or cinemas to escape the heat.

建議: 句子结构不完整且重复，应简化并用连接词连接原因和结果，使表达更清晰。

範例: I prefer dry weather because where I live is often wet. The floors and clothes get damp, and sometimes there is a bad smell due to the humidity.

建議: 回答中缺少主语，句子不完整。应完整表达并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, of course. I always check the weather forecast before going out because I like to do outdoor activities such as sports, visiting parks, or swimming.

建議: 回答应避免不确定表达，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并用连接词连接观点。

範例: In recent years, summers have become hotter and winters colder, which may be due to the greenhouse effect. I read about this on the Internet and in the news.

建議: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。应使用连接词并补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with dry climates, like Xinjiang, because I don't enjoy the wet weather where I live. I want to experience different environments and activities there.

× it rains almost two or five days a week.

✓ it rains almost two to five days a week.

这里的表达应使用“two to five days”表示范围，而不是“two or five days”，否则意思不明确。

× I can just stay in some big shopping mall or supermarket or cinema, the indoor place.

✓ I can just stay in some big shopping malls, supermarkets, or cinemas, the indoor places.

表示泛指多个场所时，名词应使用复数形式，且并列时应使用逗号和连词。

× Dry weather because I am the place I live in is always in the wet weather and the floor is always wet and the clothes are always wet and there is also some bad smell because of the weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because the place I live in is always wet; the floor and clothes are always wet, and there is also a bad smell because of the weather.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语，且重复使用“wet”，应拆分句子并调整语序，使表达更清晰。

× Like to have some outdoor activities such as doing sport, visiting the park or go swimming in the outdoor places.

✓ I like to have some outdoor activities such as doing sports, visiting the park, or going swimming in outdoor places.

“like to have”前应加主语“I”，且“doing sport”应为“doing sports”，“go swimming”应改为“going swimming”以保持并列结构一致。

× The weather is becoming more and more hot in summer and more and more cold in winter.

✓ The weather is becoming hotter and hotter in summer and colder and colder in winter.

比较级应使用“hotter”和“colder”而非“more and more hot/cold”，表达更自然。

× Yes, of course I don't like the wet weather, so I want to visit some cities in dry weather such as Xinjiang and want to try something.

✓ Yes, of course I don't like the wet weather, so I want to visit some cities with dry weather such as Xinjiang and want to try something.

“cities in dry weather”表达不准确，应改为“cities with dry weather”表示“拥有干燥气候的城市”。