天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details about the weather in each season. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

範例: I live in a place that experiences four distinct seasons. In winter, the weather is very cool and sometimes snowy, while summer is hot and sunny. Spring and autumn bring mild temperatures and colorful leaves.

建議: Make sure your answer is complete and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because the cool atmosphere makes me feel comfortable and refreshed. Also, the bright and clear skies during cold days lift my mood.

建議: Your answer should be more coherent and specific. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your preference and reasons clearly. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: I prefer dry weather over wet weather because heavy rain in my area often causes flooding, which is very troublesome. Dry days allow me to go outside and enjoy activities without worry.

建議: Try to form complete sentences and use correct grammar. Clearly state how often you check the forecast and why it is important to you, using linking words for clarity.

範例: I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving my house because it helps me decide what clothes to wear. This habit ensures I am prepared for the day's weather.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks relevant content. Try to directly address the question with specific effects of climate change you have noticed, using complete sentences and appropriate vocabulary.

範例: In recent years, I have noticed that climate change has caused more extreme weather in my area, such as hotter summers and heavier rainfall. This affects people's daily lives and the environment.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more detailed. Explain why you want to visit these places and what you hope to experience, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions and cultures. For example, I want to see snowy places since I have never been to one.

× In my area we experienced 4 season in the year.

✓ In my area we experience 4 seasons in the year.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons in a year. Also, 'experienced' is past tense, but the statement is about a general fact, so present tense 'experience' is appropriate.

× We have winter and summer have lots of different in winter atmosphere is very cool.

✓ We have winter and summer. There are lots of differences; the winter atmosphere is very cool.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'have lots of different' should be 'lots of differences' (plural noun), and the sentence structure is incorrect. Splitting into two sentences and correcting the noun form improves clarity.

× Will.

✓ (Remove this fragment as it is incomplete and unclear.)

'Will' alone is not a complete sentence and does not fit the context. It should be removed or completed to convey meaning.

× I prefer two more than hot weather because the when the weather cool atmosphere make me very comfortable and.

✓ I prefer cold weather more than hot weather because when the weather is cool, the atmosphere makes me very comfortable.

'Two' is incorrect; it should be 'cold'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'atmosphere'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× And everything bright.

✓ And everything is bright.

The sentence lacks a verb. Adding 'is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I prefer bright more than wet weather because when the wet weather in in my area have a lot of rain and surcharge very plague it makes me sad.

✓ I prefer dry weather more than wet weather because when it rains a lot in my area, it causes flooding and many problems, which makes me sad.

'Bright' is incorrect in this context; 'dry' fits better. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'wet weather'. 'Surcharge very plague' is unclear; replaced with 'causes flooding and many problems' for clarity.

× I don't I don't like it.

✓ I don't like it.

The phrase 'I don't I don't' is a repetition error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× Every check in the weather forecast in every morning when I go out to go out my house I must check for class weather because it will impact to my closer.

✓ I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave my house because it affects my choice of clothes.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and unclear phrases. 'Every check in the weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'I check the weather forecast'. 'Go out to go out my house' is redundant and incorrect; 'before I leave my house' is correct. 'Impact to my closer' should be 'affects my choice of clothes'.

× So I find a climate change in volunteer eventually in my area it makes everyone. Loves Freddy.

✓ I have noticed climate change occurring in my area; it affects everyone. The weather has become unpredictable.

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. 'Find a climate change in volunteer eventually' is incorrect and unclear. Rewriting for clarity and grammatical correctness is necessary.

× Yes, of course I want to visit other cities that have different climate from my from my area I live because I want to train and have a appear.

✓ Yes, of course I want to visit other cities that have different climates from the area where I live because I want to learn and have new experiences.

'Climate' should be plural 'climates' to match 'other cities'. 'From my from my area I live' is repetitive and incorrect; rephrased for clarity. 'Train and have a appear' is unclear; replaced with 'learn and have new experiences' to convey intended meaning.