天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子断断续续，缺少完整句子结构。建议练习使用完整句子表达，并且避免重复和断句错误。

範例: I live in Shenzhen, which is located in the southern part of China. The weather here is usually hot and humid because of its geographical location.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子断断续续，缺少具体理由。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

範例: I come from Jilin Province in northeast China, where the weather is very cold. I have lived there for 25 years, so I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable to me.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议练习用连贯的句子表达观点，并详细说明原因。

範例: I prefer dry weather because my clothes dry faster, which is very convenient. Also, I am allergic to damp conditions, so dry weather suits me better.

建議: 回答不够流畅，句子断断续续，缺少具体频率和时间描述。建议用完整句子说明习惯和原因。

範例: Before I moved to Shenzhen, I rarely checked the weather forecast. However, now I check it regularly because it often rains unexpectedly here.

建議: 回答内容简单且表达不清晰，缺少具体影响和连贯性。建议详细说明气候变化的影响，并用完整句子表达。

範例: I think climate change has caused the global temperature to rise, leading to more extreme weather events like heatwaves and storms.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体理由。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出明确原因。

範例: I would enjoy visiting cities with different climates for a short trip, but I prefer not to live or work there for a long time because I feel more comfortable in my current climate.

× Well, i'm living in Shenzhen, so the weather.

✓ Well, I live in Shenzhen, so the weather.

这里描述的是一个事实或习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是现在进行时。

× Because Shenzhen was situated in the. South part. Of China. So the geography location decided.

✓ Because Shenzhen is situated in the southern part of China, the geographical location determines the weather.

原句断句不完整，且时态不当。应使用一般现在时描述地理位置和其影响，且句子应连贯完整。

× I lived there for already 25 years.

✓ I have lived there for already 25 years.

表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应使用现在完成时，而不是一般过去时。

× I come from Jilin Province and it was situated in northeast China.

✓ I come from Jilin Province, which is situated in northeast China.

使用定语从句更合适，且地理位置描述应使用一般现在时。

× As as for me, I prefer to live in the. Dry weather.

✓ As for me, I prefer to live in dry weather.

重复使用"as"是错误的，且"dry weather"前不需要冠词。

× Because why wash my clothes? And it will be and it will be dry quicker than the. Learn the weather dry.

✓ Because it helps to dry my clothes quicker than in wet weather.

原句结构混乱，使用了错误的介词和词序，应简化并正确表达因果关系。

× And as for me, I'm allergic with the.

✓ And as for me, I'm allergic to it.

"allergic"后应接介词"to"，且需要明确过敏的对象。

× In before I. Come to Shenzhen. I didn't like to see the weather report.

✓ Before I came to Shenzhen, I didn't like to watch the weather report.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用一般过去时，且"watch"比"see"更合适。

× But when I was here, I. I'm accustomed to see the. Weather report because it usually rains. Randomly.

✓ But since I have been here, I have become accustomed to watching the weather report because it usually rains randomly.

描述从过去持续到现在的状态，应使用现在完成时，且"accustomed to"后接动名词形式。

× Maybe because of the. A Nino phenomenon.

✓ Maybe because of the El Niño phenomenon.

"El Niño"是专有名词，需完整且正确拼写，且前面用定冠词"the"。

× The world. And the climate in this world. Became. Becomes hotter than before.

✓ The world and its climate have become hotter than before.

描述变化趋势，应使用现在完成时，且句子应连贯。

× If I have a short journey, I think I will enjoy my. My tour there.

✓ If I have a short journey, I think I will enjoy my tour there.

原句断句错误，去掉多余的句点，使句子完整。

× But if I have to work or stay there for a long time. I think I won't accept that.

✓ But if I have to work or stay there for a long time, I think I won't accept that.

原句断句错误，应使用逗号连接，使句子完整。

× Because people. Shoot. Because it's better for people to live in.

✓ Because it's better for people to live in their own climate.

原句不完整且无意义，应补充完整表达原因和内容。