天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and unclear words. Use correct grammar and punctuation to make your answer clearer. Also, provide a more structured response with linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: The weather where I live is mostly hot throughout the year. However, during the rainy season, we experience heavy rainfall which sometimes causes floods and other problems.

建議: Complete your sentences and avoid leaving thoughts unfinished. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer moderate weather, neither too cold nor too hot, because it helps people stay energetic and carry out their daily activities without any discomfort.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Make sure your answer is coherent by using linking words and providing specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can be inconvenient for travelling and other activities. It often causes delays and difficulties on the roads.

建議: Complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about how often you check the forecast and why it is important.

範例: During the monsoon season, I often check the weather forecast to know the expected conditions. This helps me decide whether to carry a raincoat or an umbrella when I go out.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar. Provide specific examples of climate change effects and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Nowadays, climate is changing more frequently than before due to human activities that harm the environment. This has led to effects such as rising temperatures, unpredictable weather patterns, and increased natural disasters.

建議: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific examples of cities you want to visit.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with snowy climates, such as London and other parts of Europe, because I want to experience snow and different weather conditions.

× From from where I live most of the time it is very hot climate and during some months it is heavily RA rain any days rain causes many problems like floods and other.

✓ Where I live, most of the time the climate is very hot, and during some months it rains heavily. Rainy days cause many problems like floods and others.

The original sentence has repetition ('From from'), incorrect word order, and unclear phrasing. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be broken into clearer parts. Correcting the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to have a moderate weather, neither cold nor hot since it will help the people to be more energetic and do their activities without any disturbance.

✓ I prefer to have moderate weather, neither cold nor hot, since it helps people to be more energetic and do their activities without any disturbance.

The word 'weather' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'will help' is changed to 'helps' to match the general truth. The sentence is corrected for article usage and verb tense consistency.

× It also helps them to be active on their daily life because when.

✓ It also helps them to be active in their daily life because when the weather is moderate, they feel better.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because when'. Completing the sentence provides clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I prefer dry weather since we weather is very inconvenient for travelling and other things.

✓ I prefer dry weather since wet weather is very inconvenient for travelling and other things.

The phrase 'we weather' is incorrect; it should be 'wet weather'. This is a pronoun and word choice error that affects meaning.

× It prevents people from travelling easily because I there maybe also many.

✓ It prevents people from travelling easily because there may also be many obstacles.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unclear phrasing ('I there maybe also many'). Correcting the sentence structure and completing the thought improves clarity.

× When in monsoon season, I often check weather forecasts because it helps us to know the weather conditions It helps us to decide whether to take a raincoat or an umbrella during the day it also.

✓ During the monsoon season, I often check weather forecasts because they help us know the weather conditions. They help us decide whether to take a raincoat or an umbrella during the day.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing punctuation and incomplete ending. Breaking it into two sentences and completing the thought improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Nowadays climate is changing very frequently than before because most of the things done by the humans cost environment to be affected.

✓ Nowadays, the climate is changing more frequently than before because most of the things done by humans affect the environment.

The sentence has tense and word choice errors. 'Cost environment to be affected' is incorrect; it should be 'affect the environment'. Also, 'more frequently' is the correct comparative form.

× It create climate changes like.

✓ It creates climate changes like floods and droughts.

The verb 'create' should be 'creates' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs examples to complete the thought.

× Yes, I would like to visit cities where there are snow and to I like to experience the snow and the weather conditions of cities like London, Europe, et cetera.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities where there is snow, and I would like to experience the snow and the weather conditions of cities like London, in Europe, etc.

The phrase 'there are snow' is incorrect; 'snow' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is'. Also, 'to I like' is incorrect and should be 'I would like'. Adding commas and correcting prepositions improves clarity.