天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，注意语法和词汇的正确使用，避免重复和语音错误。

範例: I live in Taiwan, which is located in a subtropical region. The weather here is usually hot, wet, and humid, which can make people feel uncomfortable. The temperature also varies a lot throughout the year.

建議: 回答内容较好，但表达略显重复且缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。

範例: I totally prefer cold weather, especially winter, because I enjoy wearing many layers of clothing. It gives me a sense of safety, and in my opinion, winter clothes are more stylish than summer clothes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子不完整。建议简化句子，注意语法准确，表达清晰。

範例: I prefer dry weather because it makes people feel more comfortable and cozy. Wet weather is often too humid, which can make people feel uncomfortable.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

範例: I check the weather forecast every day because in Taiwan, heavy rains often occur in the afternoons during summer. It is important for me to know the weather before going out to avoid getting caught in the rain.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清，且内容不准确。建议学习相关词汇和句型，表达观点时要清晰具体。

範例: I think climate change has significantly affected temperatures and caused delays in the seasons. It has also led to the melting of icebergs in the Arctic and Antarctic regions.

建議: 回答内容完整，但表达略显重复，句子结构可以更自然。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Of course, I would like to visit countries like America or Canada, where there is snow in winter. Since Taiwan is mostly hot and has no snow, I really want to experience snowy places.

× I live in Taiwan which located at subtropical on the map and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet and humid and makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here change ha have a have a big range.

✓ I live in Taiwan which is located in the subtropical area on the map, and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet, and humid, which makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here changes and has a big range.

句子中缺少动词“is”来构成被动语态“is located”，且“subtropical”前应加介词“in”表示位置。动词“change”应使用第三人称单数形式“changes”，因为主语是“temperature”。此外，句子中“ha have a have a”是重复错误，应删除。

× I live in Taiwan which located at subtropical on the map and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet and humid and makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here change ha have a have a big range.

✓ I live in Taiwan which is located in the subtropical area on the map, and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet, and humid, which makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here changes and has a big range.

主语“temperature”是第三人称单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“changes”。

× I live in Taiwan which located at subtropical on the map and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet and humid and makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here change ha have a have a big range.

✓ I live in Taiwan which is located in the subtropical area on the map, and I would say the weather here is really hot, wet, and humid, which makes people really uncomfortable because the temperature here changes and has a big range.

“located at subtropical”中应使用介词“in”表示“位于某区域”，而非“at”。

× I check weather forecast every day because Taiwan, it's quite often that we have heavy rains in afternoon and summer.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day because in Taiwan, it's quite often that we have heavy rains in the afternoon and summer.

“check weather forecast”缺少冠词“the”，且“in afternoon”应为“in the afternoon”，表示特定时间段。

× I check weather forecast every day because Taiwan, it's quite often that we have heavy rains in afternoon and summer.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day because in Taiwan, it's quite often that we have heavy rains in the afternoon and summer.

“weather forecast”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指的天气预报。

× If I didn't see the weather forecast before I went out, I may.

✓ If I don't see the weather forecast before I go out, I may get caught in the rain.

条件句时态不一致，应使用一般现在时表示习惯性动作，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× If I didn't see the weather forecast before I went out, I may.

✓ If I don't see the weather forecast before I go out, I may get caught in the rain.

条件句中表达习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，而非过去时。

× I think the climate change significantly impact the temperature and lead seasons delayed and another things that it impacted is the icebergs in Arctic and Antarctic.

✓ I think climate change significantly impacts the temperature and leads to delayed seasons, and another thing it impacts is the icebergs in the Arctic and Antarctic.

“the climate change”中“climate change”通常不加冠词；“another things”应为“another thing”，单数形式。

× I think the climate change significantly impact the temperature and lead seasons delayed and another things that it impacted is the icebergs in Arctic and Antarctic.

✓ I think climate change significantly impacts the temperature and leads to delayed seasons, and another thing it impacts is the icebergs in the Arctic and Antarctic.

主语“climate change”是第三人称单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“impacts”和“leads”。

× It makes them smell.

✓ It makes them melt.

“smell”意为“闻起来”，与冰山融化的语境不符，应使用“melt”表示“融化”。

× Of course, I would like to visit America or Canada or of the regions that have snow, because in Taiwan there's no snow in winter.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit America or Canada or other regions that have snow, because in Taiwan there's no snow in winter.

“or of the regions”中“of”使用错误，应改为“other”表示“其他的”。

× We're more in hot places compared to other nations.

✓ We're more in hot places compared to other countries.

“nations”虽然可用，但“countries”更常用且自然。

× So I really want to go places where it's snowy.

✓ So I really want to go to places where it snows.

“go places”缺少介词“to”，且“where it's snowy”表达不自然，改为“where it snows”更符合习惯用法。