天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Instead of 'a lot more cold', say 'much colder'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: The weather where I live is generally warm, but recently it has become much colder than before.

建議: Good answer with clear preference and examples. To improve, use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make the answer more coherent. For example, use 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons.

範例: I definitely prefer hot weather because I enjoy summer and spring. For instance, during these seasons, we can do many activities like going to the aquatic park, which are not possible in winter.

建議: There are several grammar and vocabulary mistakes here. Use 'dry weather' instead of 'dry water'. Also, complete your sentences clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why you prefer dry weather.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel tired and uncomfortable all day.

建議: Good structure and content. To improve, correct small grammar mistakes like 'at the mornings' should be 'in the mornings'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas better.

範例: Yes, I always check the weather forecast because it is essential to be prepared. For example, I check it every morning, and it has helped me a lot.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more precise. Avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words like 'for example' and improve vocabulary, e.g., 'unprecedented' instead of 'have no precedent'.

範例: I believe the effects of climate change have dramatically increased recently. For example, winters are longer, and summers have unprecedentedly high temperatures.

建議: Improve fluency by using more natural phrases like 'I definitely would'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'Besides that's'. Use linking words such as 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to connect ideas.

範例: I definitely would like to visit cities with different climates. It's important and interesting to experience places different from my daily life. Moreover, I enjoy traveling and learning about different climates.

× Where I live the weather is quite warm, despite the fact that nowadays it is a lot more cold than it was in the past.

✓ Where I live the weather is quite warm, despite the fact that nowadays it is a lot colder than it was in the past.

The adjective 'cold' should be in its comparative form 'colder' when comparing two states. Using 'more cold' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'colder'.

× I think I prefer dry water.

✓ I think I prefer dry weather.

The word 'water' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'dry weather'. Using 'water' here is a prepositional and lexical error, as 'dry' describes weather, not water.

× It is not so comfortable when it is weather.

✓ It is not so comfortable when the weather is wet.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The phrase 'when it is weather' is incorrect; it should specify the condition, such as 'when the weather is wet'. This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× For instance I I am all day like so tired and everything is so difficult.

✓ For instance, I feel tired all day and everything is so difficult.

The original sentence has repetition ('I I') and awkward phrasing ('like so tired'). The correction improves clarity and grammatical structure by removing repetition and using proper verb forms.

× I check it often, I would say every day at the mornings for instance.

✓ I check it often, I would say every day in the mornings, for instance.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to parts of the day like 'mornings'. The correct preposition is 'in' for general times of day.

× I check it often, I would say every day at the mornings for instance.

✓ I check it often, I would say every day in the mornings, for instance.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'mornings' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× Besides that's, I really enjoy traveling and learning from other cities and I think climate is interesting.

✓ Besides that, I really enjoy traveling and learning from other cities, and I think the climate is interesting.

The phrase 'Besides that's' is incorrect; it should be 'Besides that'. Also, 'climate' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific concept.