天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不完整，如“temperature usually you just jump from 38°C to 20”表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述天气变化，避免重复。

範例: The weather in my hometown is very hot in summer and extremely cold in winter. People often say that spring and autumn are almost non-existent because the temperature jumps quickly from 38°C to 20°C.

建議: 回答结构清晰，但连接词使用可以更自然，如用“because”后避免重复“and besides”。建议用更丰富的词汇表达原因。

範例: I prefer hot weather because it usually brings beautiful sunshine, which I enjoy. Also, cold weather requires wearing thick clothes, which can be quite inconvenient.

建議: 回答中有重复表达“dry weather”，建议使用多样化词汇。细节描述具体，但可用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable. During the plum rain season in my hometown, everything becomes sticky and clothes take a long time to dry, which is quite unpleasant.

建議: 时态使用不当，如“checked”应为“check”。句子较长且结构复杂，建议简化并注意语法。

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what clothes to wear. I also check if I need to bring an umbrella to avoid getting wet or protect myself from strong sunshine.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“day summer days”。建议注意语法准确性，并丰富细节描述。

範例: I think the most obvious effect of climate change recently is that summer days have become much hotter than before. For example, many areas in China experienced temperatures reaching 40°C this year.

建議: 回答内容丰富，但有重复词汇“so I I”。建议注意发音和表达的流畅性，避免重复。

範例: I would love to visit cities with different climates. Since the weather in my hometown can be quite extreme, I want to spend winters in warmer places and summers in cooler areas to avoid harsh weather.

× People in my hometown often say that spring and autumn don't even exist in my hometown because the temperature usually you just jump from 38°C to 20.

✓ People in my hometown often say that spring and autumn don't even exist in my hometown because the temperature usually just jumps from 38°C to 20.

这里的主语是temperature，单数形式，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式jumps，而不是you just jump。

× I checked the weather forecast every morning in order to decide what kind of clothes to wear, and I have to figure out if I need to bring an umbrella in order to prevent getting wet under rainy days or get burned if there's a heavy sunshine.

✓ I check the weather forecast every morning in order to decide what kind of clothes to wear, and I have to figure out if I need to bring an umbrella in order to prevent getting wet on rainy days or getting burned if there's heavy sunshine.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，所以checked改为check。另外，'under rainy days'不合适，应该用on rainy days；'get burned'前面缺少动名词形式，保持结构一致，改为getting burned；'a heavy sunshine'中sunshine是不可数名词，前面不加冠词a。

× ...to prevent getting wet under rainy days or get burned if there's a heavy sunshine.

✓ ...to prevent getting wet on rainy days or getting burned if there's heavy sunshine.

介词用法错误，应该用on rainy days而不是under rainy days；sunshine是不可数名词，前面不加冠词a。

× ...if there's a heavy sunshine.

✓ ...if there's heavy sunshine.

sunshine是不可数名词，前面不加冠词a。

× I think the most obvious effect of climate change in recent years is that day summer days are getting much hotter than it used to be.

✓ I think the most obvious effect of climate change in recent years is that summer days are getting much hotter than they used to be.

原句中'day summer days'重复且多余，应删去'day'；'it used to be'中的it指代不明，应该用they指代复数的summer days。

× ...than it used to be.

✓ ...than they used to be.

summer days是复数，代词应使用they而不是it。

× ...so I I would like to visit warmer places in winter and to travel to cooler places in summer in order to avoid the extreme weather.

✓ ...so I would like to visit warmer places in winter and travel to cooler places in summer in order to avoid the extreme weather.

句中重复出现了'I'，应删除多余的一个。