天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar, such as 'The weather where I live changes very frequently, sometimes it's hot and sometimes it's cold.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: The weather where I live changes quite often. Some days are very hot, while others can be quite cold. This variability makes it interesting but sometimes hard to plan my day.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity by saying, 'I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me get tanned and feel uncomfortable.' Also, try to expand your answer with a linking word to add more detail.

範例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather tends to make me get tanned, which I don't like. Moreover, the heat can be quite uncomfortable and irritating for me.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing, such as 'I prefer dry weather because it makes commuting easier and walking more comfortable.'

範例: I prefer dry weather because it makes commuting much easier. Additionally, walking outside is more comfortable when it's dry rather than wet.

建議: Use more natural expressions like 'I usually check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up because it helps me plan my day.' Also, avoid repetition and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up. This helps me decide what to wear and plan my daily activities.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use accurate vocabulary. For example, say 'Climate change has significant effects on the Earth, such as global warming, which causes hotter weather and affects air quality.' Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar.

範例: In recent years, climate change has had serious effects on the Earth. For example, global warming has led to hotter temperatures and has impacted the quality of the air we breathe.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. For example, 'I prefer not to visit places with very different climates because my body is used to the weather where I live, and I might get sick.' Also, avoid repetition and keep your answer concise.

範例: I prefer not to visit cities with very different climates because my body is accustomed to the weather here. Traveling to places with different weather might make me feel unwell.

× Where I'm living, weather is most oftenly changed very frequently, like every day when we wake up.

✓ Where I live, the weather changes very frequently, like every day when we wake up.

The adverb 'most oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'very often' or 'very frequently'. Also, 'Where I'm living' is better expressed as 'Where I live' for habitual actions. 'Weather' is a singular noun and requires 'the' before it. The verb 'changed' should be in present tense 'changes' to match the habitual action.

× Where I'm living, weather is most oftenly changed very frequently, like every day when we wake up.

✓ Where I live, the weather changes very frequently, like every day when we wake up.

The noun 'weather' is uncountable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject 'weather', so 'changes' is correct.

× Sometime it's very hot and sometimes it's very cold.

✓ Sometimes it's very hot and sometimes it's very cold.

The word 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I like cold weather because in like in hot weather it I got tan and also it's very irritating for me.

✓ I like cold weather because in hot weather I get tanned and it is also very irritating for me.

The phrase 'because in like in hot weather it I got tan' is ungrammatical and redundant. 'Like' is unnecessary here. 'Got tan' should be 'get tanned' to express habitual action. Also, 'it's' is better expanded to 'it is' for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather because in dry weather it's easy to commute everywhere and it's comfortable to walk in wherever we want.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in dry weather it's easy to commute everywhere and it's comfortable to walk wherever we want.

The preposition 'in' before 'wherever we want' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Walk wherever we want' is the correct form.

× Yes, I am very habitual to check the weather every day like when I'm getting up.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather every day when I get up.

The phrase 'I am very habitual to check' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I have a habit of checking'. Also, 'when I'm getting up' should be 'when I get up' to indicate a habitual action.

× So the my my first thing is to check weather because to to do my everyday works.

✓ So my first thing is to check the weather because I need to do my everyday work.

The phrase 'the my my' is redundant and incorrect; only 'my' is needed. 'Check weather' requires the definite article 'the'. 'To to do' is a repetition error; it should be 'I need to do'. 'Everyday works' should be 'everyday work' as 'work' is uncountable here.

× In recent years, I think the weather changing is very effective on the earth.

✓ In recent years, I think the changing weather has a strong effect on the earth.

'The weather changing' is awkward; 'the changing weather' is better. 'Is very effective on the earth' is incorrect; 'has a strong effect on the earth' is the correct expression.

× Like the the most common example is the global warming.

✓ The most common example is global warming.

The phrase 'Like the the' is redundant and incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary here. Also, 'the global warming' should be 'global warming' without 'the'.

× Because of the global warming everyone is suffering with the hot weather and also the level of oxygen, so it got low level.

✓ Because of global warming, everyone is suffering from the hot weather, and also the oxygen level has decreased.

The phrase 'suffering with' should be 'suffering from'. 'The level of oxygen' is better expressed as 'the oxygen level'. 'So it got low level' is ungrammatical; 'has decreased' is correct.

× No, I don't like to visit any other country or any other city which have a different weather because our body is getting habitual with that weather where we are living.

✓ No, I don't like to visit any other country or city which has different weather because our bodies get used to the weather where we live.

'Which have' should be 'which has' to agree with singular 'city' or 'country'. 'Different weather' does not need 'a'. 'Our body is getting habitual' is incorrect; 'our bodies get used to' is the correct expression. 'Where we are living' is better as 'where we live'.

× So I can't, I don't want to go anywhere because I'm getting sick cause of that weather because of the different weather.

✓ So I can't; I don't want to go anywhere because I get sick due to that weather, because it is different.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Cause of' should be 'because of' or 'due to'. 'Because of the different weather' is redundant after 'that weather'. Using a semicolon or period improves clarity.