天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: The weather where I live is quite pleasant because I live in the highlands, so it is usually cool and comfortable.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to do many activities like swimming, and it helps clothes dry quickly, which is very convenient.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp lại ý và thiếu sự cụ thể. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và cung cấp lý do rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục và tự nhiên.

範例: I prefer dry weather because, like hot weather, it makes outdoor activities easier and more enjoyable.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh những phần không liên quan.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast in the evening about three times a week to plan my activities.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

範例: I think climate change has caused more storms in recent years, and many people around the world are not doing enough to protect the environment.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'classmates' thay vì 'climates'). Bạn nên sửa lỗi và mở rộng câu trả lời để nó tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: No, I prefer not to visit cities with different climates because I really enjoy the weather in my country.

× The weather in my country is not not bad because I live in highland and the weather in here is very cool.

✓ The weather in my country is not bad because I live in the highlands and the weather here is very cool.

The phrase 'in highland' is incorrect; it should be 'in the highlands' because 'highlands' is a plural noun and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'in here' is incorrect; 'here' alone is sufficient as an adverb of place.

× I prefer hot weather because the hot weather can help me do a lot of things like go swimming pool, make the clothes dry fast and it have more useful.

✓ I prefer hot weather because hot weather can help me do a lot of things like go to the swimming pool, make clothes dry fast, and it is more useful.

The phrase 'go swimming pool' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the swimming pool' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. 'Make the clothes dry fast' should be 'make clothes dry fast' as 'clothes' is plural and does not need 'the' here. 'It have more useful' is incorrect; it should be 'it is more useful' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form.

× I prefer hot weather because the hot weather can help me do a lot of things like go swimming pool, make the clothes dry fast and it have more useful.

✓ I prefer hot weather because hot weather can help me do a lot of things like go to the swimming pool, make clothes dry fast, and it is more useful.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'; the correct form is 'has' or 'is' depending on the intended meaning. Here, 'it is more useful' is appropriate.

× I prefer dry weather because it's like the hot weather and it also help me do a lot of things like hot weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's like hot weather and it also helps me do a lot of things like hot weather.

'Like the hot weather' should be 'like hot weather' because 'hot weather' is a general concept and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer dry weather because it's like the hot weather and it also help me do a lot of things like hot weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's like hot weather and it also helps me do a lot of things like hot weather.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'it'; therefore, it should be 'helps'.

× Yes, I often check in the weather forecast. I often take an egg in the evening and there are I think 3 three times a week.

✓ Yes, I often check the weather forecast. I often take an egg in the evening and I think about three times a week.

The phrase 'check in the weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather forecast' without 'in'. The phrase 'there are I think 3 three times a week' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I think about three times a week' to express frequency properly.

× I think the effect of climate change reason recent year is storm and the people on the world are not protect the.

✓ I think the effect of climate change in recent years is storms and people in the world are not protecting it.

'Reason recent year' is incorrect; it should be 'in recent years' to indicate time. 'Storm' should be plural 'storms' to match the context. 'The people on the world' should be 'people in the world'. 'Are not protect the' is incorrect; it should be 'are not protecting it' using the present continuous tense and correct object pronoun.

× I think the effect of climate change reason recent year is storm and the people on the world are not protect the.

✓ I think the effect of climate change in recent years is storms and people in the world are not protecting it.

The pronoun 'the' at the end is incorrect; it should be 'it' referring to climate change. Also, 'people on the world' should be 'people in the world'.

× No, I don't like to visit other cities that have different classmates from my life because I love my weather in my country.

✓ No, I don't like to visit other cities that have different climates from my life because I love the weather in my country.

'Classmates' is incorrect; the intended word is 'climates'. Also, 'my weather' should be 'the weather' as it refers to a specific weather in the country.