天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在一些语法错误和用词不当，如“wiser”应为“weather”，“raise”应为“rises”，“can't be quiet uncomfortable”表达不清晰。建议注意基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免表达模糊。

範例: I currently live in Xiamen, where the weather is quite hot. During this season, the temperature often rises very high, making it uncomfortable to stay outside for a long time.

建議: 回答内容较好，但最后一句不完整，缺少具体水果名称。建议补充具体细节，使回答更完整和具体。

範例: I prefer hot weather because it means summer is coming. During this season, we can enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and hiking. Besides, there are plenty of delicious seasonal fruits to eat, such as mangoes and lychees.

建議: 回答中多处词汇错误，如“white ones”应为“wet weather”，“dry wise”应为“dry weather”，“white wine”应为“wet weather”。建议加强词汇准确性和表达清晰度。

範例: I prefer wet weather. Firstly, dry weather makes my skin very dry and uncomfortable, which is unpleasant. Secondly, wet weather helps plants and fruits grow well, making the environment look more beautiful and fresh, especially during the rainy season.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“before I went to before I go out”和“decide why they take an umbrella”。建议简化句子结构，确保语法正确和表达明确。

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I go out. It helps me decide whether to take an umbrella or not.

建議: 回答内容较好，表达清晰且有具体例子。建议可以增加一些连接词，使句子更连贯。

範例: Research shows that in recent years, global temperatures have been rising rapidly due to climate change. As a result, the ice in polar regions is melting, which threatens the habitats of many animals such as polar bears and seals.

建議: 回答中多处词汇和语法错误，如“watch the other city in different ways”，“wiser”应为“weather”，“Shihu”可能是“Xihu”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子结构的完整性。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For example, West Lake in Hangzhou is well known for its cloudy weather.

× Well, I currently live in Xiamen and the wiser here is quite hot.

✓ Well, I currently live in Xiamen and the weather here is quite hot.

wiser 是错误的单词，正确的应该是 weather（天气）。这是形容词使用错误，导致句子意思不明确。

× During this season the temperature often raise very high, making it feel very hot.

✓ During this season the temperature often rises very high, making it feel very hot.

主语 temperature 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 raise 应该用第三人称单数形式 rises。

× Because of this, I can't be quiet uncomfortable to stay outside for a very long time.

✓ Because of this, I can't be quite comfortable staying outside for a very long time.

quiet 应为 quite，表示“相当”，且句子表达应为“不能感到舒适”，原句用法错误。

× Well, I prefer hot weather because when the temperature is rising, that means summer is coming.

✓ Well, I prefer hot weather because when the temperature rises, that means summer is coming.

此处描述习惯性事实，应该用一般现在时 rises，而不是进行时 is rising。

× Besides, there are plenty of delicious seasonal fruits to to eat like.

✓ Besides, there are plenty of delicious seasonal fruits to eat.

句子末尾多余的 like 使句子结构不完整，应删除。

× Well, I prefer white ones.

✓ Well, I prefer dry ones.

根据上下文，white 应为 dry，表示“干燥的”，原句用词错误。

× Firstly, dry wise makes my skin very dry and all comfortable, which is quite unpleasant.

✓ Firstly, dry weather makes my skin very dry and uncomfortable, which is quite unpleasant.

wise 应为 weather，all comfortable 应为 uncomfortable，形容词使用错误。

× Second, white wine helps plants and fruits go well, making the environment look more beautiful and fresh, for example during this rain season.

✓ Second, white rain helps plants and fruits grow well, making the environment look more beautiful and fresh, for example during this rainy season.

white wine 应为 white rain，go well 应为 grow well，rain season 应为 rainy season，词汇和形容词使用错误。

× Yes, I will check the weather forecast in the morning before I went to before I go out.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast in the morning before I go out.

时态混乱，前后时态不一致，应统一用一般现在时表达习惯动作。

× It helps me to decide why they take an umbrella or not.

✓ It helps me decide whether to take an umbrella or not.

句中 why 用法错误，应使用 whether 引导选择，且句子结构不正确。

× Yeah, of course, yes, I'd like to watch the other city in different ways because I think the wiser will be different.

✓ Yeah, of course, yes, I'd like to visit other cities in different ways because I think the weather will be different.

watch 应为 visit，the other city 应为 other cities，wiser 应为 weather，词序和词汇错误。

× For example, Shihu in Hangzhou and is very well known for its cloud day weather.

✓ For example, Shihu in Hangzhou is very well known for its cloudy weather.

句子结构混乱，and 多余，cloud day weather 应为 cloudy weather，表达更准确。