天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is informative but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating the same information. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better.

範例: The weather in Thorai region is mostly hot, warm, and wet throughout the year. However, during winter, it becomes very cold, with temperatures dropping to around 2°C.

建議: Your answer conveys your preference but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it is comfortable to go outside and visit places. In contrast, hot summer weather makes it difficult to be outdoors during the day, so I usually wait until evening when it cools down.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and informal expressions. Try to avoid repeating words and use more formal vocabulary. Also, provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather often makes people sweaty and uncomfortable. Therefore, dry weather feels fresher and more pleasant to me.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast to know the upcoming weather conditions for the next day or two. This helps me plan my activities, such as carrying an umbrella if rain is expected.

建議: Your answer is vague and incomplete. Try to provide specific effects of climate change with clear explanations. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect your points.

範例: In my opinion, climate change has caused several problems recently. Firstly, global warming has increased temperatures worldwide. Secondly, it has led to irregular rainfall patterns, causing untimely rains in many areas.

建議: Your answer is good but a bit informal and ends abruptly. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: I live in a hot and wet area, which can sometimes be unpleasant. Therefore, I would definitely like to visit other cities with different climates, such as Elam, which is nearby and known for its cool weather and beautiful hilly landscapes.

× Well, I frequently take the climate in the weather forecast and the upcoming climatic situation because it will help me to get idea about the weather that will be tomorrow or day after tomorrow.

✓ Well, I frequently check the weather forecast and the upcoming climatic situation because it helps me get an idea about the weather for tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.

The phrase 'take the climate in the weather forecast' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'check' when referring to looking at a forecast. Also, 'get idea about' should be 'get an idea about'. Prepositions and verb choices need correction for natural English usage.

× In my opinion, there are various effects of climate change in the recent year.

✓ In my opinion, there are various effects of climate change in recent years.

The phrase 'in the recent year' is incorrect because 'various effects' implies multiple years. The plural 'recent years' is appropriate here.

× Secondly, the important effect that whether climate change has resulted is untimely raining over.

✓ Secondly, an important effect that climate change has resulted in is untimely rainfall.

The phrase 'whether climate change has resulted' is incorrect; it should be 'that climate change has resulted in'. Also, 'raining over' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'rainfall'. Prepositions and word choice need correction.

× But in the winter season it is very cold and the temperature could reach up to 2°C and yeah mostly it is warm and wet but cold in the winter.

✓ But in the winter season, it is very cold and the temperature can reach as low as 2°C. Yes, mostly it is warm and wet, but cold in the winter.

The modal verb 'could' is acceptable but 'can' is more appropriate for general facts. Also, the sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity. 'Reach up to' is better expressed as 'reach as low as' when referring to low temperatures.

× Well, I like cold weather because you can go outside or visit somewhere, but in the hot, hot sea season of summer it is very hard for you to go outside and you have to wait for the evening or when sun can sit and you can get.

✓ Well, I like cold weather because you can go outside or visit places, but in the hot summer season, it is very hard to go outside and you have to wait for the evening or when the sun sets to go out.

The phrase 'hot sea season' is incorrect; it should be 'hot summer season'. 'When sun can sit' is a mishearing or typo for 'when the sun sets'. Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity.

× Well, I prefer dry weather because in the wet weather most of the time people will get sweaty sweaty and most of the people smell during the warm weather.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, people often get very sweaty and may have body odor during warm weather.

The repetition 'sweaty sweaty' is incorrect. Also, 'most of the people smell' is vague and should be 'may have body odor'. Adjective and adverb usage needs correction for clarity and naturalness.

× So I can plan according to the weather like for example carrying umbrella if it is going to rain in the.

✓ So I can plan according to the weather, for example, by carrying an umbrella if it is going to rain.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Carrying umbrella' needs an article 'an umbrella' and the phrase 'if it is going to rain in the' is incomplete. Sentence structure and article usage need correction.

× Well, the place where I live is mostly hot and wet and it is sometime unpleasant.

✓ Well, the place where I live is mostly hot and wet, and it is sometimes unpleasant.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Pronoun usage is correct but adverb form needs correction.

× So yeah, I would definitely would like to visit different cities, like for example Elam that is very near to us and it is a tourist destination which is mostly cool.

✓ So yeah, I would definitely like to visit different cities, for example, Elam, which is very near to us and is a tourist destination that is mostly cool.

The phrase 'would definitely would like' has a repeated modal verb 'would'. Also, 'like for example' is redundant; 'for example' alone is sufficient. Conjunction and modal verb usage need correction.