天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇描述天气。

範例: I live in a tropical climate where it is usually hot and humid. The weather is often warm and sometimes rainy.

建議: 表达较为清晰，但有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，建议注意句子结构和用词准确性。

範例: I prefer hot weather because I don't tolerate cold well. I feel more comfortable in summer than in winter.

建議: 回答不完整且结尾突然，建议完整表达观点，避免句子未完结，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sticky. Staying in dry conditions makes me feel more comfortable.

建議: 回答不完整且重复，表达混乱，建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I check it online when it looks like it might rain so I can bring an umbrella.

建議: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，具体说明气候变化的影响。

範例: In my country, the number of hot days has increased recently. Summers are hotter, and people feel more uncomfortable because of the heat.

建議: 回答未完成且表达不流畅，建议完整表达想法，注意语法和句子结构。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I find Hong Kong's hot and humid weather uncomfortable, and it affects my skin.

× I'm leaving a tropical climate soon and which is humid, which can be humid, hot and ramp and hot at the same time and therefore the weather can be very high and.

✓ I'm living in a tropical climate soon which is humid, hot, and damp at the same time, and therefore the weather can be very hot.

句中“ramp”应为“damp”，且“hot and ramp and hot”重复且不通顺，需改为“hot and damp”。此外，“leaving”应为“living”，表示居住。这里涉及单复数和词汇错误。

× I'm leaving a tropical climate soon and which is humid, which can be humid, hot and ramp and hot at the same time and therefore the weather can be very high and.

✓ I'm living in a tropical climate which is humid, hot, and damp at the same time, and therefore the weather can be very hot.

“ramp”应为“damp”，形容词使用错误。

× I'm leaving a tropical climate soon and which is humid, which can be humid, hot and ramp and hot at the same time and therefore the weather can be very high and.

✓ I'm living in a tropical climate which is humid, hot, and damp at the same time, and therefore the weather can be very hot.

“and which is humid”中“which”指代不明确，句子结构混乱，应简化为“which is humid”。

× I prefer hot weather. I'm a person who is afraid of being cold because my body cannot tolerate cold weather. So I'm feeling cold is more comfortable for me and that's why I like summer more than winter.

✓ I prefer hot weather. I'm a person who is afraid of the cold because my body cannot tolerate cold weather. So feeling cold is uncomfortable for me, and that's why I like summer more than winter.

“I'm feeling cold is more comfortable”时态和表达错误，应为“feeling cold is uncomfortable”。

× Well I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sticky and I think staying in a dry condition made me feel more comfortable and.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sticky, and I think staying in dry conditions makes me feel more comfortable.

“in a dry condition”应为“in dry conditions”，介词和冠词使用不当。

× Umm, well, I did not have the habit of checking the weather forecast. Usually I will check the weather forecast online when I when when there's some rains recently because raining because the rainy day, I need to bring the.

✓ Umm, well, I did not have the habit of checking the weather forecast. Usually, I check the weather forecast online when it has been raining recently because on rainy days, I need to bring an umbrella.

“there's some rains recently”时态错误，应为“it has been raining recently”；“raining because the rainy day”表达不完整且不正确。

× Well, in my country, I think the number of hot days are increasing and especially in summer, people here are feeling more hotter and also the numbers of hot lights are also increasing.

✓ Well, in my country, I think the number of hot days is increasing, and especially in summer, people here feel hotter. Also, the number of hot nights is increasing.

“number”是单数，谓语应为“is”；“more hotter”比较级错误，应为“hotter”；“numbers of hot lights”应为“number of hot nights”，单复数和词汇错误。

× Yes, I definitely want to because staying in Hong Kong I'm not really comfortable with hot and humid weather and also my skin conditions is not really good under this climate, so I really want to go to a.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to because staying in Hong Kong, I'm not really comfortable with hot and humid weather, and also my skin condition is not really good under this climate, so I really want to go somewhere else.

“skin conditions is”应为“skin condition is”，单复数和代词使用错误；句尾不完整，需补充。