天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит вопрос, что неуместно в ответе на экзаменационный вопрос. Старайтесь давать прямой ответ с описанием погоды, избегая вопросов к экзаменатору. Также можно добавить немного деталей о погоде, чтобы ответ был более полным.

範例: The weather where I live is usually hot and dry throughout the year because it is located in the northern part of our country. This climate makes summers quite intense and winters mild.

建議: Используйте правильные грамматические формы, например, 'I prefer' вместо 'I'm preferring'. Избегайте неясных выражений, таких как 'I really want to remove the place'. Лучше объясните причину предпочтения холодной погоды с конкретными деталями.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable, unlike the hot and dry weather which can be exhausting.

建議: Ваш ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь ясно выразить свои предпочтения и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, объясните, почему вам нравится влажная погода и как вы относитесь к сухой.

範例: As I mentioned before, I enjoy rainy and wet weather because it feels fresh. However, I can tolerate dry weather as well since I find it comfortable and it doesn't annoy me.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Старайтесь строить предложения правильно и логично, используя связующие слова. Объясните, как часто и почему вы проверяете прогноз погоды.

範例: I usually don't check the weather forecast in summer, but during autumn and winter, I check it every day to decide what clothes to wear. For example, if it's cold, I bring my jacket.

建議: Ответ очень краткий и нечеткий. Постарайтесь сформулировать полное предложение, объясняя причины и последствия изменения климата с конкретными деталями.

範例: I think climate change is mainly caused by human activities, such as pollution and dumping trash into the oceans, which harm the environment and affect the climate every day.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя связующие слова и объясняя свои мечты и планы более подробно.

範例: I really dream of visiting cities with different climates in the future. That's why I am preparing for my IELTS exam to improve my English skills.

× I'm preferring the cold weather, especially because I'm really fed up of the hot and dry weather.

✓ I prefer the cold weather, especially because I'm really fed up with the hot and dry weather.

The verb 'prefer' is a stative verb and is not used in the continuous form. Also, the correct preposition after 'fed up' is 'with', not 'of'.

× I really want to remove the place where it's always dry, rainy or windy.

✓ I really want to leave the place where it's always dry, rainy, or windy.

The verb 'remove' is incorrect in this context; 'leave' is appropriate when talking about leaving a place. Also, commas are needed to separate the adjectives describing the weather.

× Like I said before, I really enjoy all the rainy weather, wet weather.

✓ Like I said before, I really enjoy rainy and wet weather.

Repeating 'weather' is redundant; combining adjectives with 'and' is more natural.

× I really put up both dry weather because of I really find it comfortable and not getting me angry.

✓ I really put up with dry weather because I find it comfortable and it doesn't make me angry.

The phrase 'put up' requires the preposition 'with'. Also, 'because of I' is incorrect; it should be 'because I'. The phrase 'not getting me angry' should be 'it doesn't make me angry' for clarity.

× Now in the summer I don't want to care the weather but when it's in the autumn season or winter season or everyday check because I want to know what to wear.

✓ Now in the summer I don't want to care about the weather, but in autumn or winter, I check it every day because I want to know what to wear.

The verb 'care' requires the preposition 'about'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and proper tense usage.

× If it will cold I want I will be bring with my the jacket if it's not I will be wear something.

✓ If it is cold, I will bring my jacket; if not, I will wear something else.

In conditional sentences, 'if' clauses use the present tense, not 'will'. Also, the verb forms and word order are corrected for clarity.

× The main reason is the people, the trash they bring in the oceans, the climate change every day because the people.

✓ The main reason is people and the trash they bring into the oceans; climate change happens every day because of this.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use ('bring into').

× I really dream about it and I in the future I really want it.

✓ I really dream about it and in the future, I really want to do it.

The pronoun 'it' is unclear; adding 'to do it' clarifies the meaning. Also, the sentence structure is improved for fluency.