天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达自然，例如“I'm living in the northern of China”应改为“I live in northern China”。此外，回答可以更简洁有效，避免冗余。

範例: I live in northern China, where the weather is usually sunny, but it sometimes rains.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“if it was very hot I will sweat”应为“if it is very hot, I sweat”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意表达的准确性。

範例: I prefer cold weather because when it is hot, I sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable. However, in cold weather, I can wear more clothes to keep warm.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the white weather is good”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并避免模糊表达。

範例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin sensitive and uncomfortable. However, I also like snowy weather because it looks beautiful.

建議: 回答较完整，但存在语法错误，如“decided”应为“decide”，“gonna to”应为“going to”。建议注意语法准确性和用词自然。

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day so I can decide what to wear and bring an umbrella if it might rain. It helps me a lot.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“more hot”应为“hotter”，“getting more and more seriously”应为“becoming more serious”。建议使用更准确的表达和丰富细节。

範例: In recent years, global warming has become more serious, causing hotter weather than usual, which makes people feel uncomfortable during extreme heat.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“where the climate is very cold there”。建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit Russia because it has a very cold climate. I enjoy cold weather and want to play in the snow and make a snowman.

× Well, I'm living in the northern of China, so the weather here always sunny and I can see the sun every day, but sometimes it rains.

✓ Well, I'm living in the north of China, so the weather here is always sunny and I can see the sun every day, but sometimes it rains.

“in the northern of China”中的“northern”应改为名词形式“north”，且“in the north of China”是正确的表达。

× Well, I'm living in the northern of China, so the weather here always sunny and I can see the sun every day, but sometimes it rains.

✓ Well, I'm living in the north of China, so the weather here is always sunny and I can see the sun every day, but sometimes it rains.

“the weather here always sunny”缺少系动词“is”，应为“the weather here is always sunny”。

× Compared with hot weather, I prefer cold because if it was very hot I will sweat.

✓ Compared with hot weather, I prefer cold because if it is very hot I will sweat.

条件句中表示一般现在时的真实条件，应使用“if it is”而非“if it was”。

× But if there is very cold I can dress more clothes to keep warm it.

✓ But if it is very cold I can wear more clothes to keep warm.

“there is very cold”应改为“it is very cold”；“dress more clothes”应改为“wear more clothes”；“keep warm it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× Well, I prefer wet weather because when the weather become dry my skin will be more sensitive which makes me feel so annoying.

✓ Well, I prefer wet weather because when the weather becomes dry my skin becomes more sensitive which makes me feel very annoyed.

主语“the weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“becomes”；“feel so annoying”应为“feel very annoyed”，因为“annoying”是形容词，表示使人烦恼的，主语应是人，故用“annoyed”。

× But the white weather is good.

✓ But the white weather is good.

此句中“white weather”表达不清，可能是“wet weather”的误写，若是“wet weather”，应改为“wet weather”。

× Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast like every day because I can decided what I'm gonna to wear depending on the weather forecast and I can bring umbrellas before it rains, so it helps me a lot.

✓ Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast like every day because I can decide what I'm gonna wear depending on the weather forecast and I can bring umbrellas before it rains, so it helps me a lot.

“can decided”中“decided”应为动词原形“decide”；“gonna to wear”中“to”多余，应去掉。

× In recent years, the global warming is getting more and more seriously as the weather will become more hot than usual, so people may feel uncomfortable in the extremely hot weather.

✓ In recent years, global warming has been getting more and more serious as the weather becomes hotter than usual, so people may feel uncomfortable in extremely hot weather.

“the global warming”中“global warming”前不加冠词；“is getting more and more seriously”中“seriously”应为形容词“serious”；“the weather will become more hot”应为一般现在时“the weather becomes hotter”；“more hot”应为比较级“hotter”；“the extremely hot weather”中“the”多余。

× Yes, I would always like to visit Russia where the climate is very cold there and I prefer cold weather and I want to play snow and make snowman.

✓ Yes, I would always like to visit Russia where the climate is very cold, and I prefer cold weather and I want to play in the snow and make a snowman.

“play snow”应为“play in the snow”；“make snowman”应为“make a snowman”；“where the climate is very cold there”中“there”多余，应去掉。