天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid fragmented sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about the weather in your city.

範例: I live in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, which experiences four seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. Summers are hot and humid, while winters can be quite cold compared to other parts of the country.

建議: Provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons in complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Be specific about why you prefer cold weather.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to enjoy hot drinks and wear warm clothes, which I find comforting during winter.

建議: Answer directly and clearly, using correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer dry weather because during dry seasons, clothes dry quickly, unlike in wet weather when everything feels moist and humid.

建議: Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid repetition. Clearly state your routine and use linking words to organize your answer logically.

範例: I usually check the weather forecast twice a day: once in the morning before I leave the house and once in the evening before I go to bed to prepare for the next day.

建議: Provide a complete and coherent answer with specific effects of climate change. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: I believe climate change has caused significant damage to ecosystems and has contributed to global warming, which in turn increases the risk of diseases.

建議: Answer the question directly with clear and complete sentences. Explain your reasons using specific details and linking words. Avoid unclear or incomplete phrases.

範例: I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would allow me to experience new seasonal changes and better prepare for different weather conditions.

× I live in Vietnam which contains full sheets of weather which are summer, spring, autumn and. Winter.

✓ I live in Vietnam, which has four seasons: summer, spring, autumn, and winter.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. 'Contains full sheets of weather' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'has four seasons'. Also, the list of seasons should be separated by commas and the period after 'and' is incorrect.

× And. I live in the capital of Vietnam. Which is. Hot in the summer in extremely cold in the weather.

✓ I live in the capital of Vietnam, which is hot in the summer and extremely cold in the winter.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect prepositions. 'In the weather' is incorrect; it should be 'in the winter'. Also, the sentence should be combined properly with commas and conjunctions.

× I will say that I preferred cold weather because experience the. Cold in winter.

✓ I will say that I prefer cold weather because I experience the cold in winter.

The use of 'preferred' (past tense) is incorrect when expressing a current preference. It should be 'prefer' (present tense). Also, 'experience' needs a subject 'I' to be grammatically correct.

× Give me. Unsatisfaction of how I could drink hot drinks and. Wear warm clothes.

✓ It gives me satisfaction because I can drink hot drinks and wear warm clothes.

'Unsatisfaction' is not a correct word; the correct term is 'satisfaction'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be rephrased for clarity.

× I will say that I prefer dry weather because in dry seasons. All the codes would be dry properly in contrast in wet weather.

✓ I will say that I prefer dry weather because in dry seasons, all the clothes dry properly, unlike in wet weather.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a typo: 'codes' should be 'clothes'. Also, the contrast needs to be clearly expressed with proper conjunctions.

× It always had to experience the moisty and the. Hum. Humid all the weather.

✓ It always has to experience moisture and humidity in the weather.

'Had to experience' implies past necessity, but the sentence refers to a general truth, so 'has to experience' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'moisty' is not a word; 'moisture' is appropriate.

× Aye. Check them once in the morning before I go out. And once and once in the evening.

✓ Yes, I check it once in the morning before I go out and once in the evening.

The original sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect adverb placement. 'Aye' is informal and replaced with 'Yes'. Also, 'them' should be 'it' referring to the weather forecast.

× Before I sleep 2 Check out the weather tomorrow. Two separate.

✓ Before I sleep, I check the weather forecast for tomorrow. These are two separate times.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to clearly express the two separate times of checking the weather.

× They damage. The ecosystem. And. Causes and cost the global warming which leads to disease and.

✓ They damage the ecosystem and cause global warming, which leads to diseases.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb forms. 'Causes and cost' is incorrect; it should be 'cause'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× Pleasant with visiting other cities that have different climates from my city.

✓ I would be pleased to visit other cities that have different climates from my city.

'Pleasant with visiting' is incorrect usage. The correct expression is 'I would be pleased to visit'. This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× Because I could experience. The changes between seasons in the city also. I could. Prepare phone.

✓ Because I could experience the changes between seasons in the city, and I could also prepare accordingly.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Prepare phone' is likely a typo or mistranslation; 'prepare accordingly' fits the context better.