天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct sentence structures and vocabulary related to weather. Also, avoid unrelated phrases like 'hard work'. For example, say 'The weather is usually very humid here, and today it looks cloudy, so it might rain.'

範例: The weather where I live is usually very humid. Today, it looks quite cloudy, and I think it might rain later.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I prefer cold weather because it is comfortable to work and go outside. In hot weather, my skin burns easily like a barbecue.'

範例: I prefer cold weather because it is comfortable to work and go outside. However, in hot weather, my skin burns easily like a barbecue.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, explain your reasons clearly with linking words. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because when it is wet, I have to carry an umbrella, which is inconvenient for me.'

範例: I prefer dry weather because when it is wet, I have to carry an umbrella, which is inconvenient for my daily life.

建議: Your answer shows good intention but is fragmented and unclear. Use complete sentences and linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before leaving my house. If it might rain, I take an umbrella, and if it is hot, I dress lightly.'

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before leaving my house. If it might rain, I take an umbrella, and if it is hot, I dress lightly.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect information. Try to give clear and accurate ideas about climate change effects using correct grammar. For example, say 'I know that traditionally we have six seasons, but due to climate change, the weather patterns have become unpredictable, and summers are longer and hotter.'

範例: I know that traditionally we have six seasons, but due to climate change, the weather patterns have become unpredictable, and summers are longer and hotter.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs better grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, say 'Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from mine. I especially want to visit places where it snows in winter to experience snow falling on my hands and face.'

範例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from mine. I especially want to visit places where it snows in winter to experience snow falling on my hands and face.

× Today it's look very cloudy.

✓ Today it looks very cloudy.

The verb 'look' should be in the third person singular present tense 'looks' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× because it's very convenient for work on go outside

✓ because it's very convenient to work and go outside

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before 'work', and 'on' before 'go outside' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' before verbs in infinitive form, and 'and' should connect the two verbs.

× but if it is hot I cannot go outside in this.

✓ but if it is hot I cannot go outside in this weather.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and incomplete; it should be clarified as 'this weather' to specify the context.

× Hot weather because my skin burns like. Barbecue.

✓ Hot weather because my skin burns like a barbecue.

The simile is incomplete without the article 'a' before 'barbecue'. Also, the sentence fragment should be combined properly.

× I definitely go for a drive weather because when weather is wait you cannot go outside without umbrella

✓ I definitely go for dry weather because when the weather is wet you cannot go outside without an umbrella

The word 'drive' is incorrect; it should be 'dry'. 'Wait' is a misspelling of 'wet'. Also, 'umbrella' needs the article 'an'.

× and carrying umbrella is such a hassle for my daily life. I cannot carry it everywhere and it it did, it doesn't. He doesn't have that.

✓ and carrying an umbrella is such a hassle in my daily life. I cannot carry it everywhere, and if I did, it wouldn't be convenient.

The pronouns and sentence structure are incorrect and confusing. 'Umbrella' needs the article 'an'. The phrase 'it it did, it doesn't. He doesn't have that.' is unclear and should be corrected to a conditional sentence.

× If is there any possible of raining I have to take umbrella with me

✓ If there is any possibility of rain, I have to take an umbrella with me

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'If is there' should be 'If there is'. 'Possible of raining' should be 'possibility of rain'. 'Umbrella' needs the article 'an'.

× I just put. Meaning.

✓ I just put on sunscreen.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Likely, the student meant to say they put on sunscreen to protect from heat.

× Yes, I actually knowing that God is just six season, but divided by the changing of the climate, it's become a 223 seasons now.

✓ Yes, I actually know that God created just six seasons, but due to climate change, it has become 2 or 3 seasons now.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'knowing' should be 'know'; 'God is just six season' is incorrect; 'divided by the changing of the climate' should be 'due to climate change'; '223 seasons' is likely a mispronunciation of '2 or 3 seasons'.

× Summer, winter and rainy season. But most of the times it is summer, so it's. It's affected our climate change.

✓ Summer, winter, and rainy seasons. But most of the time it is summer, so it has affected our climate.

'Season' should be plural 'seasons'. 'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time'. 'It's affected' should be 'it has affected'. 'Our climate change' is incorrect; it should be 'our climate'.

× Yes, I definitely love to visit the cities that are different climate formed where I live.

✓ Yes, I definitely love to visit cities that have a different climate from where I live.

The phrase 'different climate formed' is incorrect. It should be 'have a different climate from'. The article 'the' before 'cities' is unnecessary.

× I mainly want to visited the cities where have snow falls in the winter season.

✓ I mainly want to visit the cities where it snows in the winter season.

'Want to visited' is incorrect; it should be 'want to visit' (base form after 'want to'). 'Where have snow falls' is incorrect; it should be 'where it snows'.

× I just want to experience the snow falls in my hand and my scheme.

✓ I just want to experience the snowfall in my hand and on my skin.

'Snow falls' should be 'snowfall' as a noun. 'My scheme' is incorrect; likely meant 'my skin'. Also, 'in my hand' and 'on my skin' are the correct prepositions.