天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural and clear expressions. Avoid unnecessary pauses and incomplete sentences. For example, instead of 'In my home down,' say 'Where I live,' and avoid fragmented sentences like 'and it gets. Quite muggy.'

範例: Where I live, the weather is scorching hot right now because it's summer. The temperature often rises above 40°C, and it feels quite muggy.

建議: Make your sentences complete and coherent. Use linking words properly to connect ideas. Avoid fragmented sentences like 'For instance. In cold weather. I can wear cozy clothes and. Enjoy outdoor activities.'

範例: I prefer cold weather because I find it more refreshing and comfortable compared to hot weather. For instance, in cold weather, I can wear cozy clothes and enjoy outdoor activities.

建議: Be careful with pronunciation and sentence completeness. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Also I can. I can go outside,' say 'Also, I can go outside without worrying...'.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. Also, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surfaces.

建議: Use the correct tense and add more details to enrich your answer. For example, say 'I check the weather forecast daily' and explain when or how you check it.

範例: I check the weather forecast daily, usually in the morning, so that I can plan my day and go outside without worrying about the weather.

建議: Try to connect your ideas more smoothly using linking words. Also, explain briefly how global warming and ozone depletion cause these effects.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused significant effects mainly because of global warming and the depletion of the ozone layer. For instance, we have seen more frequent typhoons and severe droughts as a result.

建議: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'I have never experienced is known before.' Make your answer clear and complete.

範例: Definitely, I would like to visit cities with colder climates that often have snow because I have never experienced snow before.

× The temperature often rises above 40°C and it gets. Quite muggy.

✓ The temperature often rises above 40°C and it gets quite muggy.

The sentence is incorrectly split by a period, causing a sentence fragment. The phrase 'Quite muggy' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete thought.

× I prefer cold weather because I find it more refreshing and compatible compared to what weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find it more refreshing and comfortable compared to hot weather.

The phrase 'compatible compared to what weather' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'comfortable compared to hot weather' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× For instance. In cold weather. I can wear cozy clothes and. Enjoy outdoor activities.

✓ For instance, in cold weather, I can wear cozy clothes and enjoy outdoor activities.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods. It should be combined into one sentence with proper commas for clarity and flow.

× I prefer driver because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

✓ I prefer drier weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

The word 'driver' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'drier' to describe weather with less moisture.

× Also I can. I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surface is.

✓ Also, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surfaces.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an incorrect phrase 'wet surface is'. It should be a complete sentence with 'wet surfaces' as the correct plural noun.

× I checked the weather forecast on daily basis so that I can go outside without worrying about it.

✓ I check the weather forecast on a daily basis so that I can go outside without worrying about it.

The verb 'checked' is past tense but the context implies a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate. Also, 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be correct.

× Mainly due to global warming and depletion of ozone layer.

✓ This is mainly due to global warming and the depletion of the ozone layer.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'This is' completes the sentence. Also, 'ozone layer' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Definitely, I would like to visit cities that have colder climates and more prone to snow because I have never experienced is known before.

✓ Definitely, I would like to visit cities that have colder climates and are more prone to snow because I have never experienced that before.

The phrase 'more prone to snow' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'experienced is known before' is incorrect; it should be 'experienced that before' to refer to the experience.