天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly describe the weather and avoid unclear phrases like 'depends are sometimes'. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: I live in the northern part of India, near the Himalayan range, where the weather is mostly cool. However, sometimes it becomes overcast and cloudy.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Please give a clear preference and explain reasons logically using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like '10s my body'.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for travelling. In contrast, hot weather can be exhausting, especially when exposed to direct sunlight.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Please express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid fragmented sentences.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it makes travelling easier and more convenient. On the other hand, wet weather can cause difficulties such as slippery roads and travel delays.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Please answer directly and explain clearly when and why you check the weather forecast. Avoid unclear phrases like 'worry that however will be active'.

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do so on special occasions. This helps me prepare for any bad weather that might affect my plans.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Please provide a clear opinion and specific effects of climate change using proper linking words and complete sentences.

範例: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as heatwaves and heavy rainfall. This is mainly due to global warming increasing temperatures worldwide.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more formal expressions. Also, try to explain why you want to visit such places with clear reasons.

範例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. It would be a valuable experience that would prepare me for future travels and adventures.

× I live in northern part of India where weather is almost cool.

✓ I live in the northern part of India where the weather is almost cool.

In English, we use the definite article 'the' before 'northern part' to specify a particular region. Also, 'weather' is a singular uncountable noun and usually requires 'the' when referring to the specific weather of a place.

× Well it still depends are sometimes weather starts overcasting certain as I am on the Himalayan range.

✓ Well, it still depends; sometimes the weather starts overcasting because I am in the Himalayan range.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'Depends' needs an object or complement, and 'overcasting' should be preceded by 'starts'. Also, 'as' is better replaced by 'because' to indicate reason, and 'on' should be 'in' when referring to being located within a mountain range.

× I prefer cold weather as it is easier and convenient to travel anywhere in cold weather varies.

✓ I prefer cold weather as it is easier and more convenient to travel anywhere in cold weather.

The word 'varies' is incorrectly used here and makes the sentence unclear. The sentence should end after 'cold weather' to express the preference clearly. Also, 'more convenient' is the correct comparative form.

× In cold seasons mainly it is very hard to survive outside in the direct sunlight also.

✓ In cold seasons, it is mainly very hard to survive outside in the direct sunlight.

The adverb 'mainly' should be placed before 'very hard' for clarity. Also, commas help separate introductory phrases. The sentence structure is improved for better readability.

× 10s my body.

✓ It affects my body.

'10s' is unclear and likely a typo. The sentence needs a subject and verb; 'It affects my body' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× Where is in the wet weather it is difficult to measure.

✓ Whereas in wet weather, it is difficult to travel.

'Where is' is incorrect; 'Whereas' is the correct conjunction to contrast dry and wet weather. Also, 'measure' is incorrect in this context; 'travel' fits better.

× Or travel also in the vertic weathers closer unable to. So.

✓ Also, it is difficult to travel in severe weather conditions.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it with proper structure and vocabulary clarifies the meaning.

× No, I'm not in the habit of checking weather forecast, but sometimes only special occasions.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast, except on special occasions.

'Weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'sometimes only special occasions' is ungrammatical; 'except on special occasions' is correct.

× I usually check your weather forecast.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast.

'Your' is incorrect here as the speaker refers to the general weather forecast, not the listener's. 'The' is the correct article.

× It becauses of the worry that however will be active and also our bad weather can.

✓ It is because of the worry about how the weather will be and how bad weather can affect us.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect conjunctions and word forms. 'Because' is misspelled, and the sentence needs to be restructured for clarity.

× From the recent, yes, weather is changing rapidly.

✓ Recently, yes, the weather has been changing rapidly.

'From the recent' is incorrect; 'Recently' is the correct adverb. Also, present perfect continuous tense 'has been changing' is appropriate to indicate ongoing change.

× However, due to the increasing global warming, the weather is firmly hold day by day and also I would like to mention that.

✓ However, due to increasing global warming, the weather is changing rapidly day by day, and I would like to mention that.

'The increasing global warming' should be 'increasing global warming' without 'the'. 'Firmly hold' is incorrect; 'changing rapidly' fits better. The sentence is also incomplete and needs proper conjunctions.

× Oh.

✓ [No correction needed as this is an interjection.]

'Oh' is an interjection and does not require correction.

× It will it will be a golden opportunity ever and I will never miss the boat 'cause it gives me a lot of experience and they prepare me for my further travelings over adventures.

✓ It will be a golden opportunity, and I will never miss the boat because it will give me a lot of experience and prepare me for my future travels and adventures.

Repetition of 'it will' is unnecessary. 'Ever' is misplaced. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'They prepare me' is incorrect; 'it will prepare me' is correct. 'Further travelings over adventures' is ungrammatical; 'future travels and adventures' is appropriate.