天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I live in a place where the weather is mostly rainy, especially during the monsoon season. However, sometimes it is dry depending on the time of year, so the weather changes with the seasons.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences.

範例: I like both hot and cold weather because each has its advantages. For example, when it is hot, I enjoy cold drinks, and when it is cold, I like to wear warm clothes and stay cozy.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do outdoor activities without any problems. Moreover, dry weather makes it easier to travel and work efficiently.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has incomplete sentences and lacks fluency. Try to speak in complete sentences and use linking words to explain when and why you check the forecast.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out or planning a trip with my friends. This helps me prepare for any weather changes in the coming days.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use clear sentences and specific examples to explain the effects of climate change.

範例: Climate change has caused increased humidity and environmental changes. For instance, deforestation and urbanization have replaced green areas with concrete buildings, affecting the climate negatively.

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and has grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and explain why you like visiting places with different climates.

範例: Yes, I enjoy visiting cities with different climates because it gives me a new experience. When I visit such places, I usually adapt quickly to the weather and enjoy exploring the environment.

× I live in rainy weather but it depends on the season sometimes in rainy weather.

✓ I live in a place with rainy weather, but it depends on the season sometimes.

The original sentence lacks proper article usage and has awkward phrasing. 'I live in rainy weather' is incorrect; we say 'I live in a place with rainy weather.' Also, 'sometimes in rainy weather' is redundant and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses the present tense appropriately.

× Rain not coming? So it is impossible to say that only raining weather is very good or.

✓ If the rain is not coming, it is impossible to say that only rainy weather is very good.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Rain not coming?' is a fragment and should be a conditional clause. Also, 'only raining weather is very good or' is incomplete. The correction forms a complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Yeah, I like both Horton cold weather, but it depends on the situation.

✓ Yeah, I like both hot and cold weather, but it depends on the situation.

The original sentence contains a typo 'Horton' which seems to be a combination of 'hot' and 'or'. The correction separates the two adjectives 'hot' and 'cold' correctly and uses 'both' appropriately.

× If we are living in hot weather that time we need some.

✓ If we are living in hot weather, at that time we need some cold environment.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'We need some' is vague. The correction completes the thought by specifying 'some cold environment' and adds necessary punctuation for clarity.

× An when we are facing cold weather, that time we've want some.

✓ And when we are facing cold weather, at that time we want some warmth.

The original sentence has a typo 'An' instead of 'And', and 'we've want' is incorrect; it should be 'we want'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'some' what? The correction fixes the pronoun usage and completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Yes I like mostly dry weatherby cause in dry weather we can take or we will do everything whatever we want.

✓ Yes, I mostly like dry weather because in dry weather we can do everything we want.

The original sentence has a typo 'weatherby' instead of 'weather because', and awkward phrasing 'we can take or we will do everything whatever we want.' The correction fixes the preposition and simplifies the sentence for clarity.

× Especially in dry weather we will do our work without any obstacles.

✓ Especially in dry weather, we can do our work without any obstacles.

The original sentence uses 'will' which is future tense, but the context is general preference, so present tense 'can' is more appropriate. Also, a comma after 'dry weather' improves readability.

× Yes, I have the habit of checking weather forecast whenever I. Have to go somewhere or whenever I will go for a trip with my friends.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast whenever I have to go somewhere or whenever I am going for a trip with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will go' in a habitual context; present continuous 'am going' is more appropriate. Also, 'weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. The correction fixes modal verb usage and article usage.

× Yes, I have the habit of checking weather forecast whenever I. Have to go somewhere or whenever I will go for a trip with my friends.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast whenever I have to go somewhere or whenever I am going for a trip with my friends.

The phrase 'weather forecast' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific forecast. The correction adds 'the' appropriately.

× That time I. Usually check weather forecast for upcoming days, so this is my habit.

✓ At that time, I usually check the weather forecast for the upcoming days, so this is my habit.

The original sentence has punctuation errors and missing articles. 'That time I. Usually' should be 'At that time, I usually'. Also, 'weather forecast' needs 'the'. The correction fixes these issues and improves sentence flow.

× The main thing of effect of climate change in recent years is humidity and the change of environment.

✓ The main effects of climate change in recent years are humidity and environmental changes.

The original sentence uses 'thing of effect' which is awkward and incorrect. 'Effect' should be plural 'effects' to match the plural subjects. Also, 'change of environment' is better expressed as 'environmental changes'. The correction improves adjective and noun usage.

× Basically ray in everywhere people are making.

✓ Basically, everywhere people are building houses.

The original sentence 'Basically ray in everywhere people are making.' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Ray in' is likely a mishearing or typo. The correction interprets the intended meaning and uses correct prepositions and verbs.

× Houses somewhere not planting and some are cutting trees and they replace with the houses with concrete.

✓ In some places, people are not planting trees and are cutting them down, replacing them with houses made of concrete.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Houses somewhere not planting' is incorrect; it should be 'In some places, people are not planting trees'. Also, 'replace with the houses with concrete' is incorrect; it should be 'replacing them with houses made of concrete'. The correction fixes preposition use and sentence structure.

× Yes, I usually like to visit different countries where the climate different from.

✓ Yes, I usually like to visit different countries where the climate is different from where I live.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject in the relative clause. 'Where the climate different from' should be 'where the climate is different from where I live.' The correction adds the missing verb and clarifies the comparison.

× Where I live so whenever I go there I saw.

✓ Where I live, so whenever I go there, I see that the climate is very good.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb tense. 'I saw' should be 'I see' to match present tense context. Also, commas improve readability. The correction completes the sentence meaningfully.

× The climate is very good and usually we will adopt.

✓ The climate is very good and usually we adapt quickly.

The original sentence uses 'will adopt' incorrectly; 'adapt' is the correct verb here. Also, 'usually we will adopt' is awkward; 'usually we adapt quickly' is better. The correction fixes verb choice and article usage.