天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: It's raining here in England, and the rain is expected to continue for five days. I dislike rainy days because I can't go outside or visit places like museums, and I miss playing with my friends.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体理由，避免语法错误。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing warm clothes. Also, cold weather feels fresher and healthier since bacteria tend to die in low temperatures.

建議: 回答表达混乱，建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达喜好并给出具体原因。

範例: I don't like either dry or wet weather. Dry weather makes my skin feel very dry, and wet weather is uncomfortable because of the constant moisture. I'm not used to either.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议使用连贯的句子描述习惯，并注意时态和代词的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I always check the weather forecast on my phone. If it's going to rain, I prepare an umbrella and remind my friends to bring theirs as well.

建議: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达观点，说明气候变化的具体影响和原因。

範例: I think the weather has become hotter in recent years due to human activities. Climate change has negative effects on the environment and people's lives.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: I would not like to visit other cities with different climates because I don't have enough money. Although the weather here is not perfect, I find my hometown beautiful and can tolerate the climate.

× I am English and now it's a raining day and it will last. 5 days.

✓ I am English and now it's a rainy day and it will last for 5 days.

这里'raining'用作形容词时应使用'rainy'，表示'下雨的'，而不是动名词形式。

× I am English and now it's a raining day and it will last. 5 days.

✓ I am English and now it's a rainy day and it will last for 5 days.

'5 days'前应加介词'for'表示持续时间。

× I really hate the ring day because I can't go out outside.

✓ I really hate the rainy day because I can't go outside.

'ring day'应为'rainy day'，且'go out outside'重复，简化为'go outside'。

× And I can't wait to play with my friends and I can not go to the museum.

✓ And I can't wait to play with my friends, but I cannot go to the museum.

连接两个相反意思的句子时应使用'but'而非'and'。

× I prefer cold weather because I can wear some warm clothes and I can play with no. Together and because.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes and play with my friends together.

'some'在此处不必要，'no.'不明确，应改为'my friends'，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× In the code day. The bacteria was died.

✓ On cold days, the bacteria die.

'was died'错误，'die'为不及物动词，过去式为'died'，但此处应使用一般现在时描述事实。

× No, I don't like them both because I think the joy weather is very hot and my skiing well feel very dry and the Wet Wet weather was very water for.

✓ No, I don't like either because I think dry weather is very hot, my skin feels very dry, and wet weather is very watery.

'them both'应为'either'，'joy weather'应为'dry weather'，'my skiing well'应为'my skin feels'，'Wet Wet weather was very water for'表达不清，改为'wet weather is very watery'。

× And I don't use to it.

✓ And I am not used to it.

'don't use to'错误，正确表达习惯应为'am/is/are used to'。

× Yes, I always check the weather on my phone and I will prepare the. Umbrella if it's a raining day and I will tell my friends.

✓ Yes, I always check the weather on my phone and I will prepare an umbrella if it's a rainy day, and I will tell my friends.

'a raining day'应为'a rainy day'，冠词使用错误，且句子断句不当。

× That's it's a raining day and told him to bring some umbrellas.

✓ I tell them it's a rainy day and tell them to bring umbrellas.

'told him'时态和人称不一致，应使用一般现在时和复数代词'them'。

× And I just take Tim.

✓ And I just take them.

'Tim'应为'them'，指代前文提到的朋友们。

× I think. The weather. Is becoming more. Hotter in recent years because of the. Ways people of people live in.

✓ I think the weather is becoming hotter in recent years because of the way people live.

'more hotter'重复比较级，正确用法为'hotter'；'ways people of people live in'表达冗余，应简化为'the way people live'。

× Can exchange the weather and is doesn't have benefit.

✓ It changes the weather and doesn't have any benefits.

'Can exchange the weather'表达不清，改为'It changes the weather'；'is doesn't have benefit'语法错误，改为'doesn't have any benefits'。

× I'm afraid I'm not because I don't have enough money to go to other city when the climate change when the climate change because I think my hometown is very beautiful and just to.

✓ I'm afraid not because I don't have enough money to go to other cities when the climate changes, because I think my hometown is very beautiful.

'I'm afraid I'm not'表达不完整，改为'I'm afraid not'；'other city'应为复数'other cities'；'when the climate change'应为'when the climate changes'；句子末尾'and just to'不完整，删除。

× The weather is not that good, but I can bear it.

✓ The weather is not that good, but I can bear it.

此句语法正确，无需修改。