天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. For example, mention the four seasons clearly and describe the weather in each briefly.

範例: The weather in my country varies a lot depending on the region. Generally, we have four distinct seasons: summer, winter, autumn, and spring. For instance, summers are usually hot and humid, while winters can be quite cold and sometimes harsh.

建議: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your vocabulary fits the context. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layers of warm clothing. Also, cold weather helps me feel relaxed and refreshes my mind, unlike hot weather which can be uncomfortable.

建議: Improve your answer by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about why you prefer dry weather and how wet weather affects daily life.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather often causes muddy roads and flooding, which makes transportation difficult. Therefore, dry weather is more convenient and feels calming to me.

建議: Make your answer clearer by directly answering the question and using correct grammar. Explain when and why you check the forecast, using linking words to connect your points.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I travel long distances. This helps me plan my schedule better and arrive on time, especially if the weather might affect my journey.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and accurately. Use linking words to explain the effects of climate change with specific examples. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases.

範例: I believe climate change has greatly affected our lives. For example, global warming has caused summer temperatures to rise so much that it becomes difficult for people and animals to survive. This shows how climate patterns have changed recently.

建議: Make your answer more natural by using correct expressions and sentence structures. Clearly state your reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about what you like about different climates.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new weather is exciting and relaxing. For instance, I especially enjoy seeing snowfall, which is not available where I live.

× In my country, the weather where is a lot.

✓ In my country, the weather varies a lot.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'where' and lacks a proper verb structure. The phrase 'the weather where is a lot' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'the weather varies a lot' to express variability of weather conditions.

× Depending upon the region and geographical area, the weather is of four distinct types like summer, winter, autumn and spring and it varies depending upon the time to time.

✓ Depending on the region and geographical area, the weather is of four distinct types: summer, winter, autumn, and spring, and it varies from time to time.

The phrase 'depending upon' is less common and 'depending on' is preferred. Also, 'depending upon the time to time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'from time to time'. A colon is used to introduce the list of seasons.

× When it's summer it's being hot and humid, violent winters it's cold and.

✓ When it's summer, it's hot and humid; during violent winters, it's cold.

The phrase 'it's being hot and humid' is incorrect; 'it's hot and humid' is correct as 'being' is unnecessary here. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation and structure to convey the meaning clearly.

× I usually prefer cold weather because I love to take a bombs layers of clothing when it's cold outside rather than just to warm the body in the hot temperature.

✓ I usually prefer cold weather because I love to wear a bunch of layers of clothing when it's cold outside rather than just to keep warm in hot temperatures.

The phrase 'take a bombs layers' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'wear a bunch of layers'. Also, 'just to warm the body in the hot temperature' is awkward; 'just to keep warm in hot temperatures' is clearer.

× I usually prefer the cold one because I love to feel relax and my minds feel elated.

✓ I usually prefer the cold weather because I love to feel relaxed and my mind feels elated.

'Feel relax' should be 'feel relaxed' as 'relaxed' is the correct adjective form. 'My minds' is incorrect; it should be 'my mind' (singular). Also, 'the cold one' is vague; 'the cold weather' is clearer.

× Our feeling of gloom it an.

✓ Our feeling of gloom is gone.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It lacks a proper verb and object. The corrected sentence completes the thought clearly.

× I usually prefer dry weather because and wet weather it creates a lot of mud and the roads are being flooded so it's difficult to go to another place or it's difficult for transportation purposes if anyone wants to go somewhere to the job or work.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather because wet weather creates a lot of mud and floods the roads, making it difficult to travel or commute to work.

The phrase 'because and wet weather it creates' is incorrect; 'because wet weather creates' is correct. The sentence is long and awkward; it is better to simplify and clarify the meaning.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast whenever I had to go too far. Distances are with the place where I had to check the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast whenever I have to travel far. The distance to the place makes me check the weather forecast.

'Had to go too far' is past tense and incorrect here; 'have to travel far' fits better. 'Distances are with the place' is ungrammatical; 'The distance to the place' is correct.

× Weather the forecast is gold or not.

✓ Whether the forecast is good or not.

'Weather' is incorrect; the correct word is 'whether' to express a choice or condition. 'Gold' is a typo for 'good'.

× So I love to check the father forecast because it helps me to manage my schedule and to be at the place at time.

✓ So I love to check the weather forecast because it helps me manage my schedule and be at the place on time.

'Father forecast' is a typo for 'weather forecast'. 'At time' should be 'on time'. Also, 'helps me to manage' can be simplified to 'helps me manage'.

× I think that climate change is a greatly impact on actually is life because in summer due to global warming, the heat is so much that the temperature is so high that survivors could not survive in these temperature.

✓ I think that climate change has a great impact on actual life because in summer, due to global warming, the heat is so intense that people cannot survive at these temperatures.

'A greatly impact' is incorrect; it should be 'a great impact'. 'Actually is life' is ungrammatical; 'actual life' is correct. 'Survivors could not survive in these temperature' is awkward; 'people cannot survive at these temperatures' is clearer.

× So the global warming has greatly affected the temperature and the climate trade in the recent players.

✓ So global warming has greatly affected the temperature and climate trends in recent years.

'The global warming' should be 'global warming' without 'the'. 'Climate trade' is incorrect; the correct term is 'climate trends'. 'Recent players' is a mishearing or typo for 'recent years'.

× Yes, I love to visit different cities that have different climates from where I live because I love saying the different climates.

✓ Yes, I love to visit different cities that have different climates from where I live because I love seeing the different climates.

'Saying the different climates' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'seeing' to express experiencing or observing.

× It helps me to be relaxing and calming and I will delete it whenever I see different temperatures and different climates which I had never seen before.

✓ It helps me to relax and feel calm, and I feel delighted whenever I see different temperatures and climates that I have never seen before.

'Be relaxing and calming' is incorrect; 'to relax and feel calm' is correct. 'I will delete it' is incorrect; likely intended 'I feel delighted'. 'Which I had never seen before' should be 'that I have never seen before'.

× Especially I love the snowfall which is not avail.

✓ Especially, I love the snowfall which is not available here.

'Not avail' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'not available here' to indicate absence of snowfall in the speaker's location.