天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apnar uttor ektu natural o shothik bhabe prokash kora dorkar. Apni beshi boro kotha bolchen, kintu sentence gulo clear na, ar kichu word er use thik na. Apni chesta korun sohoje, shothik bhabe apnar moner kotha bolte. Sentence gulo 3-4 line er modhye rakhun.

範例: In summer, the weather is extremely hot and uncomfortable. It becomes difficult to sleep because of the heat. I find this weather quite disturbing and unpleasant.

建議: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu sentence e repetition ache, ar linking word er proyojon ache jate uttor ta aro logical hoy. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe jora dite, ar kichu specific karon dite.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it is very comfortable for me. In my country, summers are extremely hot, which I don't like. However, winters are peaceful and refreshing, so I really enjoy the cold season.

建議: Apnar uttor ektu confused mone hocche, ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni chesta korun prothome spostho vabe topic sentence bolte, tarpor supporting details dite. Linking word use korun jate uttor ta logical hoy.

範例: I prefer wet weather because it cools down the high temperatures in summer. The rain makes the environment more comfortable and relaxing for me.

建議: Apnar uttor ektu boro ar repetitive. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r shothik vabe bolte, ar linking word use korun. Specific details dite paren kobe ar koto bar apni weather forecast check koren.

範例: Yes, I have recently started checking the weather forecast every morning. I do this because the weather has been very hot, sometimes reaching 41 degrees, which is quite uncomfortable and affects my mood.

建議: Apnar uttor ektu unclear ar incomplete. Apni chesta korun prothome spostho topic sentence bolte, tarpor specific karon ar effect gulo bolte. Linking word use korun jate uttor ta logical hoy.

範例: I think climate change has caused many problems recently. For example, deforestation and pollution have increased, which harms the environment. People are not taking enough care, and this is very disturbing.

建議: Apnar uttor onek confused ar incomplete. Apni chesta korun prothome spostho uttor dite, ar sentence gulo shothik vabe complete korte. Apnar opinion clear bhabe bolun, ar supporting details din.

範例: Honestly, I do not like to visit cities with different climates because I am used to the hot weather in my city. Changing to a different climate might affect my health.

× Like in the summer, the heat is scratching.

✓ Like in the summer, the heat is scorching.

The verb 'scratching' is incorrectly used here; the correct present participle form to describe intense heat is 'scorching'. This error occurs because 'scratching' does not convey the intended meaning of extreme heat.

× I don't even sleep or see it because it's so warm here and it is really feel so disgusting because the weather is really, really bad and it's really disturbing.

✓ I don't even sleep or see it because it's so warm here and it really feels so disgusting because the weather is really, really bad and it's really disturbing.

The phrase 'it is really feel' is incorrect; the verb 'feel' should be in the simple present form 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a present tense issue where the verb form does not match the subject.

× Like in the summer in our country, it's so much heat here and in winter it's so comforting and feel so serene and feel so good.

✓ Like in the summer in our country, it's so hot here and in winter it's so comforting and feels so serene and feels so good.

The phrase 'feel so serene and feel so good' should use 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to winter. Also, 'so much heat' is better expressed as 'so hot' to describe the weather. This is a present tense and adjective usage issue.

× In our country situation, I'd really like which weather because.

✓ In our country's situation, I'd really like wet weather because.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'which weather' incorrectly. It should specify the type of weather liked, here 'wet weather'. Also, 'our country situation' should be possessive 'our country's situation'. This is an incorrect pronoun and sentence structure issue.

× In here it's very much heat, so wet weather is so much comforting and relaxing because.

✓ Here it's very hot, so wet weather is very comforting and relaxing because.

The phrase 'In here' is incorrect; 'Here' is sufficient. 'Very much heat' is better expressed as 'very hot'. Also, 'so much comforting' should be 'very comforting'. This is an incorrect preposition and adjective usage issue.

× Yes. So recently I started checking the weather forecast because it's really disturbing an anoying also because the weather is really high and the temperature feels like 41° which is like so much disturbing and frustrating.

✓ Yes. Recently, I started checking the weather forecast because it's really disturbing and annoying; also, the weather is really hot and the temperature feels like 41°, which is very disturbing and frustrating.

The phrase 'really high' is vague; 'really hot' is more appropriate for temperature. 'So much disturbing' should be 'very disturbing'. Also, 'an anoying' is a typo for 'and annoying'. This is a present tense and adjective usage issue.

× Again the mood is so much disturbed because of this weather so.

✓ Again, the mood is very disturbed because of this weather.

'So much disturbed' is incorrect; 'very disturbed' is the correct adjective usage. The sentence also ends abruptly; removing 'so' at the end improves clarity. This is an adjective usage issue.

× I think it is really affecting the climate affects in recent years because.

✓ I think it is really affecting the climate effects in recent years because.

The word 'affects' is incorrectly used; the correct noun is 'effects' when referring to consequences. This is a present tense and word choice issue.

× You know, people are cutting down trees and they only hitting the years and everything.

✓ You know, people are cutting down trees and they are only harming the earth and everything.

The phrase 'hitting the years' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to say 'harming the earth'. Also, 'they only hitting' should be 'they are only harming'. This is an incorrect preposition and verb form issue.

× Honestly speaking, I really don't like to explore things. Like this because it's really affected my. Hilt because in. My city where I live it's really hot weather and in another city like it's like flirts Ain other things which I think F.

✓ Honestly speaking, I really don't like to explore things like this because it really affects me. In my city where I live, the weather is really hot, and in another city, it's different, which I think is better.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Affected my. Hilt' is incorrect and likely meant 'affects me'. 'Flirts Ain other things which I think F' is unclear and corrected to 'it's different, which I think is better'. This is a sentence structure and clarity issue.