天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and detail. Try to use more natural expressions and provide a bit more information about the weather, such as temperature or seasons. Avoid vague phrases like "little bit high."

範例: The weather where I live is usually quite hot, especially during the summer months when temperatures can reach up to 35 degrees Celsius.

建議: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good. However, to improve, add a reason or explanation to support your preference and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing, especially compared to the heat which can be exhausting.

建議: Repeating the word 'wet' three times is unnatural and does not add meaning. Provide a clear answer with reasons or examples to support your preference. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer wet weather because it helps plants grow and cools down the temperature, making the environment feel fresh.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and providing more details about when or why you check or don't check the forecast. Use linking words to explain your habits.

範例: No, I don't check the weather forecast regularly because I usually rely on how the sky looks, but I sometimes check it before planning outdoor activities.

建議: Your answer attempts to address the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler phrases like 'So as per my point of view.' Provide clear reasons and explain them logically using linking words. Also, be careful with grammar and word choice.

範例: In my opinion, climate change is mainly caused by global warming due to increased greenhouse gas emissions, which are partly a result of the growing population and widespread use of air conditioners and refrigerators in Asia.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Make sure to respond directly with a clear opinion and provide reasons or examples. Avoid unrelated words like 'love' unless they are relevant.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as colder places, to experience new environments and enjoy different activities.

× The weather is little bit high and it's too hot.

✓ The weather is a little bit hot and it's too hot.

The phrase 'little bit high' is incorrect because 'high' is not typically used to describe weather temperature. Instead, 'a little bit hot' is appropriate to indicate a slight increase in temperature. Also, 'a' is needed before 'little bit' as it is a quantifier.

× I prefer wet, wet, wet weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather.

Repeating 'wet' three times is unnecessary and grammatically incorrect. The correct form is simply 'I prefer wet weather.' to express preference clearly.

× No, I don't check in weather forecast regularly.

✓ No, I don't check the weather forecast regularly.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'check the weather forecast' without 'in'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'weather forecast'.

× So as per my point of view, I think the biggest reason for climate change is global warming and high population. And uses of Asia air conditioners and refrigerators.

✓ In my opinion, the biggest reasons for climate change are global warming, high population, and the use of air conditioners and refrigerators in Asia.

The original sentences have awkward phrasing and incorrect structure. 'So as per my point of view' is better expressed as 'In my opinion'. 'Uses of Asia air conditioners and refrigerators' is incorrect; it should be 'the use of air conditioners and refrigerators in Asia'. Also, combining the two sentences improves clarity.

× I want to visit some love.

✓ I want to visit some places I love.

The phrase 'some love' is incomplete and unclear. It likely intends to say 'some places I love' to express desire to visit places with affection. The original sentence lacks clarity and proper object.