天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use clearer and more natural English sentences. Avoid unclear words like 'comfort rible' and improve sentence structure for better clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: The weather where I live is usually hot and humid throughout the year. For example, summers are warm but not too hot, which makes it comfortable. Also, the humidity helps keep the air fresh when we spend time outdoors.

建議: Focus on clear and complete sentences. Avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'aghbal Ain' or 'hardware there'. Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and energizing. For example, in cold weather, I can wear warm clothes and enjoy outdoor activities without feeling too hot.

建議: Good content but improve grammar and sentence structure. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I definitely prefer dry weather because it is more convenient and easier for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on surfaces. Additionally, dry weather makes it easier to plan trips or outdoor events without interruptions.

建議: Good structure and content. Improve word choice and clarity, for example, replace 'special things like umbrella or code' with clearer words.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for school. It helps me plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take an umbrella or raincoat to stay dry.

建議: Try to express ideas clearly and avoid unclear or incorrect words. Use simple sentences to explain causes and solutions of climate change logically.

範例: I think climate change has caused many problems recently, such as global warming and deforestation caused by people. To solve these problems, we need to protect trees and stop cutting forests illegally.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons for your interest in visiting different climates.

範例: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. It would be a new experience and a chance to enjoy a different lifestyle, which can be refreshing and exciting.

× For example, summer is warm but not excessively hard that making us feel comfort rible.

✓ For example, summer is warm but not excessively hot, so it does not make us feel uncomfortable.

The phrase 'that making us feel comfort rible' is incorrect because 'making' should be preceded by 'so it does not' to form a correct clause. Also, 'comfort rible' is a misspelling of 'uncomfortable'. The verb form needs to be corrected to express cause and effect properly.

× When spend times outdoor, additionally we experience humid weather which help keep the environment clean and fresh.

✓ When we spend time outdoors, we also experience humid weather which helps keep the environment clean and fresh.

The sentence lacks the subject 'we' before 'spend' and 'times' should be singular 'time' when used with 'spend'. 'Outdoor' should be 'outdoors' as an adverb. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'weather'.

× I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfort aghbal Ain convenient anet feel.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and convenient.

The original sentence contains several nonsensical words likely due to transcription errors. The correct adjectives are 'comfortable' and 'convenient' to describe the weather.

× More. Energizing an sneezing.

✓ It is more energizing and refreshing.

The phrase 'More. Energizing an sneezing.' is fragmented and unclear. 'Sneezing' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'refreshing'. The sentence should be complete and use correct adjectives.

× If compared to hardware there for example in code I can vehicles it close and enjoy outdoor activity like working without feeling. Hot.

✓ Compared to hot weather, for example, in my city, I can go outside and enjoy outdoor activities like walking without feeling hot.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors. 'Hardware' should be 'hot weather', 'code' likely 'city', 'vehicles it close' is unclear and corrected to 'go outside'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× Yes, I definitely prefer dry weather because it is more convenient an easy for daily activity.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer dry weather because it is more convenient and easy for daily activities.

The phrase 'an easy' should be 'and easy'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the context.

× For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slippery on surface.

✓ For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on surfaces.

'Slippery' is an adjective; the correct form is the verb 'slipping'. 'Surface' should be plural 'surfaces' to generalize the statement.

× Additionally, dry weather make it easier to plan trips or outdoor event without any interruption.

✓ Additionally, dry weather makes it easier to plan trips or outdoor events without any interruption.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'dry weather'. 'Event' should be plural 'events' to match 'trips'.

× I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for school.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for school.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error found.

× For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take the special things like umbrella or code to avoid the rain.

✓ For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take special things like an umbrella or a coat to avoid the rain.

'The special things' is incorrect; 'special things' without 'the' is better. 'Code' is a mishearing of 'coat'. Articles 'an' and 'a' are needed before 'umbrella' and 'coat'.

× Yes, I think in recent year there are many problems that affect the climate change.

✓ Yes, I think in recent years there are many problems that affect climate change.

'Year' should be plural 'years' to indicate a period. 'The climate change' should be 'climate change' without 'the'.

× Those are. Hurry can float charge an arm deforestation that cost from people.

✓ Those are deforestation and pollution caused by people.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Hurry can float charge an arm' is unintelligible and replaced with 'deforestation and pollution' which are common climate change problems caused by people.

× So to avoid that problem, we are make sure that.

✓ So to avoid that problem, we make sure that...

'We are make sure' is incorrect; it should be 'we make sure'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.

× We need to protect the tree, Hawaii. The selling of Tryan. A white police.

✓ We need to protect the trees and stop deforestation. It is our responsibility.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Hawaii', 'Tryan', 'A white police' are likely transcription errors. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different climatic from where I live experience and you claim it it would be.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. It would be a new experience and lifestyle, and it can be refreshing and exciting.

'City' should be plural 'cities'. 'Climatic' should be 'climates'. The sentence is fragmented and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× A new Experian, an NYU lifestyle, an it can be refreshing an exciting.

✓ A new experience, a new lifestyle, and it can be refreshing and exciting.

'Experian' should be 'experience'. 'NYU' likely 'new'. 'An' should be 'a' before words starting with consonant sounds. 'An' before 'exciting' should be 'and'.